8 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2007 11:59 am Title: Chapter 6
This was too cute! I loved the shower thing. Silly grown-ups. Loved that line. Lol<333 Really really enjoyed this story!
Date: December 09, 2006 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
This whole story is freaking adorable! And I love the idea that Pam was ignoring Jim so she could try to get her relationship with Roy back on track. And it keeps with the very sweet & nostalgic mood of the story (summer in DE, old-fashioned 5 & Dime, melting ice cream), that the final scene is left to our imaginations. I'm so glad I saw the rec for this on the FF home page!
10 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2006 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 6
This was one of the first multi-part fics I ever read in this fandom, and it is still one of the best. I love the sweetness throughout, especially the ending, which I think you handle beautifully. Wonderful!
Date: October 23, 2006 04:32 am Title: Chapter 6
They stayed out there until the sun rose and the surfers took over their beach. They fell asleep using their sweaters as pillows, and each other as blankets.
Well, this is a disappointment. You did a great job of the build-up, but then left the conclusion of your story to our imaginations. It feels like you chickened out here. I don't necessarily need a graphic play-by-play, but this is so generic I can't even tell if Pam and Jim are supposed to have had sex. As I said, a disappointment. Lovemaking on the beach would have been a sweet reward for all their angst.
Date: October 10, 2006 07:09 am Title: Chapter 6
Oh, this is one of my favorites, I just love it! Excellent job!
10 [Report This]Date: August 19, 2006 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wonderful story
10 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2006 09:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
I loved this story!
Very very cute.