1 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2023 02:24 am Title: From Bad to Worse
I'm so grateful this story is completed alrwady, because I cannot wait to read the rest!
10 [Report This]Date: October 20, 2008 05:30 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
OMG, firstly, love the Jim and Mark stuff, "I got them from your mom." I can totally see it lol.
And just wow, the end, I don't know what to say but wow, amazing!!!
Date: November 23, 2007 09:34 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
WOW!!! That was really amazing. It's so interesting to see Jim's and Pam's thoughts, and how they don't really understand what the other one is thinking. I would have loved to see Jim making his feelings as clear as he did at the end here...
8 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 07:26 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
OMG. I thought you did a great job writing Angela, but you did a zillion times better writing that scene in Jim's bedroom. Wow. Wow. WOW.
Author's Response: Yayyyy! Thanks again! I got wowed!
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 07:23 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
…Umm, yeah. Ending there is evil. Don’t be evil.
Update soon please. I await eagerly on the edge of my seat: Will Pam be honest to Jim? Will Angela send Dwight to make sure Jim acts appropriately? Will Jim sneeze in Pam’s hair while trying to be sexy? Will she break his heart again?
Author's Response:
But... being evil is so fun!
Okay, how much to I LOVE your idea for Angela to send Dwight over? Answer: A LOT. Unfortunately, ch3 is already written so I can't put it in there... but, I may use a variation on your idea later on (I'll give you credit, of course).
You rock!
Date: November 10, 2007 12:33 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
this'll help the writers' strike ?!
:P anyway, this is fantastic ! don't
stop writing ! i need a new chapter ! (:
Author's Response: I'm still writing, dani! No worries. New chapter tonight, hopefully. Thanks for the review!
Date: November 10, 2007 07:13 am Title: From Bad to Worse
Oooooooooooooooooooh my lord. Please, please, please update this quickly! This ending, to part 2, just crossed my eyes with desperation!!! PLEASE! MORE!!
Author's Response: Oh no! I've caused eye problems! Lol, Stilla, thanks for the review-- I'm hoping to have ch3 up tonight!
9 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 05:17 am Title: From Bad to Worse
For the good of the strike, I'll leave this review. WOW! Ch 1 was totally hilarious from Angela's POV. Ch 2 had a very different tone, so much more serious. I'm not quite sure how Pam will pull herself out of this one but I'm certainly interested in seeing what you think. Well done.
Author's Response: Thanks, fol! Chapter three is different in tone from the first two, I think. I hope it's a realistic resolution to the whole mess from Jim's bedroom in ch2!
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 08:34 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
So at first I was really disappointed that you started this new story, because I'm waiting for the next chapter of the Post-Benihana fic--but now I'm totally sucked in to this one, too. Can't wait for the next chapter of either one!
Author's Response: Oh jeeze. I have half of chapter 4 of my post-benihana fic totally done, and it's been that way for over a week! Now I feel guilty... must... finish... that chapter.... But I'm glad you like this one too, because ch3 should be up sometime tonight :)
Date: November 08, 2007 05:14 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
this is such a great fic, and with the writters strike and the last new Office ep airing next week, and me preparing for withdraws you MUST update asap!!!
Author's Response: No withdrawals yet Donnelly! Stay strong! (chapter 3 will hopefully be up tonight!)
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 04:29 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
Boy, you just don't let up, do you? This chapter is even better than the original Dundies episode! Oh, wow... if only this really happened, right? We never would have had to put up with season 3.
Seriously, though, you've got a solid grasp of the characters, and the dialogue just flows effortlessly like a river. It's a treat to read this, and I'll definitely be following this from now on. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Mose! I'm glad it all seems realistic to you :)
9 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 02:49 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
AH!! IT'S TRUE! It's SOOOO true!! He doesn't want that- HE WANTS MORE THAN THAT!! I'm excited for more :D
Author's Response: Yay! Ampay, that's exactly the line I almost added to the end of this, but I didn't want to copy Casino Night too much :)
Date: November 08, 2007 02:46 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
OMG. So good, need more. And it's exciting to see that good writers can still dip into old canon and make it new again.
(Also, “Oh my god!” she gasps between laughter. “You have crayons in your desk? Are you eight?” made me laugh out loud.)
Author's Response: thanks sophia! I wrote Jim's line about the crayons, and then I sort of laughed to myself and thought "oh god, I have to get rid of that line. what is he eight? Crayons?" and then I decided to keep and and give Pam my line :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 12:55 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
WOW! This chapter was intense! I need more! hehe
Author's Response: More coming soon! Don't worry :)
Date: November 08, 2007 08:32 am Title: From Bad to Worse
Hey...can I talk to you about something?
It's just...I'm in love with you.
That's how good this story is.
Author's Response:
What are you doing? What do you expect me to say to that?
Hee! Thanks so much nbyevu!
9 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 07:25 am Title: From Bad to Worse
i. iove. this fic. you are totally rocking the house on this one. i like it so much because it's just normal. them. the couch thing was spot on, trying to convince mark that it's not a big deal, pam's drunk reasoning - it all really works for me. lovely job. i can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thanks Emily! I always try really hard to keep things believable because my fics tend to be angstier than what we see on screen.
9 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 07:06 am Title: From Bad to Worse
fabulous story! You have hit each character dead on! Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Kame! I try really hard to keep them in character, even in situations that are more dramatic than what we've seen on screen.
Date: November 08, 2007 06:40 am Title: From Bad to Worse
Wow, I love angry Jim. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks gotkona :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 06:22 am Title: From Bad to Worse
Wow. That's deep stuff. I REALLY liked that a lot. Plus I'm doing my bit for the screenwriters, right? ; )
Author's Response: Thanks, kgreene. I think that negotiations will move forward now :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 05:38 am Title: From Bad to Worse
So so so good. I love me some Jim/Pam angst, and I'm sorry but Angry! Jim is hot, even if he is mad at Pam.
Your stories are always so much fun to read because you have the characters voices down perfect, and you always leave me in suspense! I can't wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks, kells! Hopefully I won't make you wait too long, although project due dates and rushing toward me at the moment. That certainly doesn't mean I won't ignore my schoolwork to write fic though :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 05:04 am Title: From Bad to Worse
LOL! Based on the fact that I was a tad tipsy myself last night this chapter hit a bit of a chord.
As I read this morning I kept scrolling down, thinking you'd be cruel and not give us a kiss until the next chapter. But YAY! you did!
“That was a big deal to me,” he snarls. “When you kiss me, it’s a big deal. So the next time you want to get drunk and have fun so that you can write it all off the next day, don’t come looking for me. I don’t want that.”
That line is amazing - because it works on so many levels. It's The Dundies, Casino Night and Gay Witch Hunt all rolled into one.
Amazing.
Author's Response: Thanks xoxoxo! I was sooooo tempted to end that line with "I want more than that" but I resisted :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 08, 2007 03:50 am Title: From Bad to Worse
Wow, this was just a perfectly crafted chapter. The kind of thing I read and think 'why can't I do that?' because it flows so beautifully and you make it seem so real and effortless.
Author's Response: Awww, Sweetpea your fic is awesome! Honestly, the things that seam effortless probably seem that way because I randomly threw them in at the last minute. Any beautiful flow is pure accidental, lol. But thanks!
Date: November 08, 2007 12:15 am Title: From Bad to Worse
OH MAN. It is very late and I cannot put together a real comment right now but I just have to say tonight: I'm LOVING this fic and will desperately be awaiting future updates! This is exactly the satisfying sort of story I've been wanting to read since rewatching The Dundies. Very good stuff. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Astraea! What a nice review :)
Date: November 08, 2007 12:11 am Title: From Bad to Worse
:O Brill stuff.
Aww poor Jim. Drunk Pam is A-mazing.
More soon!
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks. Drunk Pam was hard for me to write!
Date: November 07, 2007 11:30 pm Title: From Bad to Worse
oh man this is gooooooooood stuff! Nothing better than a Pam drunk story. Here's hoping they are completely honest with each other.
Author's Response: Thanks LoveFool! Honesty is a-comin' in chapter three :)