Date: April 24, 2021 10:31 am Title: Pam Pong
Oh I love this so much! d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: November 09, 2019 12:56 am Title: Pam Pong
Oh my, this story is amazing and adorable, and all of these at the same time. And Angela - I heard her voice and saw her disapproval while reading. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
Date: February 07, 2019 03:00 pm Title: Pam Pong
Love this story, especially the use of Angela as a bookend device. Wonderful characterization and story beats.
Date: December 04, 2016 03:39 pm Title: Pam Pong
It's been so long since I first read this and it's still amazing!
Date: September 14, 2008 02:51 pm Title: Pam Pong
Great story. I just re-watched the Dundies episode last night and wanted to find a good "post-Dundies" story. This completely fit the bill, and more! Thanks for posting it!
Date: July 16, 2008 03:42 am Title: Pam Pong
That was great! I loved it! Great job!
Date: February 07, 2008 02:14 pm Title: Pam Pong
Be aggressive! Be, be aggressive!
And you ended it with Dwight/Angela. How did you know?
This was so much fun. I haven't been reading much fanfiction lately, but I'm so glad I forayed into it again for this. Wonderful characterizations, hilarious, sweet, fitting! Thanks very much for sharing.
Date: January 05, 2008 05:54 pm Title: Pam Pong
This is probably the funniest fanfic I've ever read. And I've read TONS of fic. My friend and I keep quoting it at each other. Your Angela, in particular, is priceless.
Date: December 21, 2007 07:46 pm Title: Pam Pong
I really like that we're still getting Angela's pov. Very interesting. Thanks!
Date: December 19, 2007 08:05 pm Title: Pam Pong
This was a great story, shan! And this line? So true:
It was probably more painless that it happened now than it would have been if I’d waited until a month before my wedding.
Ah, so much heartache and angst would have been avoided. Oh well. As long as they're together now, that's what counts.
Looking foward to more of your ABC/CIA fic soon. :)
Date: December 18, 2007 10:58 pm Title: Pam Pong
hahaha shan! awesome blossom! loved it. way to end the story told thru angela. good way to bring it full circle. nice!!!
sorry you finals ate you. have a good break tho!
Date: December 18, 2007 10:20 am Title: Pam Pong
Bravo. So, so good. A first ballot Hall of Fame story. Just make sure that when you channel Angela you don't get in too deep and get stuck in her character.
Date: December 18, 2007 12:08 am Title: Pam Pong
Great job! Love this story and so happy to see it got a well-deserved blue ribbon. Hope I've healed one puppy!
Date: December 17, 2007 11:26 pm Title: Pam Pong
HEAL THE SICK PUPPIES!!! Oh, Shan...this is, so, so good I can't stand it, and yet I'm so sorry to see it go! You've got these voices down to a 'T'. And when Dwight asked for the name of who'd "done this" to Angela I nearly spit my water out all over my monitor. This was such a great take on what may have happened if TO hadn't taken SO long t get our favorite duo together. This just rocked my socks.
Date: December 17, 2007 08:58 pm Title: Pam Pong
i can't even describe how much i love your writing of angela. spot on? perfection? hilarious? amazing? brilliant? hmmm... i'll go with all of the above. this story is fabulous, and i'm so glad you got the chance to finish it! i actually snorted when i read “I don’t need morality lessons from a tramp, Pam.”
Date: December 17, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Pam Pong
What a happy surprise to see another chapter to this story! Nice way to bring it back again to Angela's perspective, however warped it might be. ;-)
Looking forward to more of your creations now that you'll have some more free time!
Date: December 17, 2007 07:10 pm Title: Pam Pong
I'm am grinning! Such a great way to end (although I'll really miss this one). Too many great lines to mention just one. Thanks for that dose of happy : )
Date: December 17, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Pam Pong
WOW! I LOVED this whole story !And I have to say best line ever:
"Dear lord! She left a drunk and clearly amorous woman on the doorstep of an untrustworthy doe-eyed rogue."
I completly bent over laughing at that line!
Date: December 17, 2007 05:40 pm Title: Pam Pong
<<"But anyway, I powered through and ended it. I just had to be aggressive."
Another pause.
"Jim." Pam's voice had a warning tone.>>
Awesome. Simply awesome. (A.W.E. - S.O.M.E)
<<"Don't be coy, Jim. Not every woman in this office finds the deviant boyish act charming," she hissed.>>
Pretty sure Jesus isn't a big fan of blatant lies there, Angela.
<<She left a drunk and clearly amorous woman on the doorstep of an untrustworthy doe-eyed rogue.>>
<the reviewer is unable to supply witty comment in response to indicated awesome line as she is laughing her ass off, specifically at the 'doe-eyed rogue' comment. She would, though, like to know how your finals-addled brain was able to come up with that>
<<"Nerfherder?" Pam suggested.>>
... 'scuse me. A what?
<<It was probably more painless that it happened now than it would have been if I'd waited until a month before my wedding.>>
Touché
<<"I will take you home. Where are you staying now?" Angela asked.
Pam floundered for a moment, unable to reply. Finally she smiled sheepishly and managed to spit out a half sentence.
"Funny story...">>
I am so ridiculously pleased, I'm almost ready to forgive you for having to go get yourself edumacated, and subsequently go all MIA.
<<The next morning Dwight came in the office to find a Baby Ruth sitting on his desk.>>
Yay!!!!
I'm so happy you finally got a chance to finish this! It turned out, as usual and expected, wonderfully!
Date: December 17, 2007 03:45 pm Title: Pam Pong
This was the perfect end to this story! You write Angela so well. I laughed out loud when I read:
"Just as indulging in that much unashamed licentiousness was dangerous to one’s eternal soul."
That is such a great line. *sigh* Oh Angela.
Nice job! I really enjoyed it!
Date: December 17, 2007 02:56 pm Title: Pam Pong
Shan!! What a treat to find this newly-completed story today!
Okay, first things first. I put your well-deserved ribbon back where it rightly belongs. (They tend to drop off when you change the status from "incomplete" to "complete." We really need some better glue, huh?)
I LOVED this chapter! What a perfect way to end this perfect story! There were several laugh-out-loud moments for me, including, but not limited to:
-"doe-eyed rogue." I feel compelled to warn you that I'm going to start a band with that name now. :)
-"nerfherder?" YES! An old school Star Wars reference FTW!
-Jim's list of commandment-breaking activities.
-And, of course, the Baby Ruth epilogue...
Just bravo and major kudos all the way around on this one, shan! It was just the thing for a Monday afternoon!