10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 08:16 pm Title: Superheroes
LMAO love it
Date: July 19, 2008 11:33 pm Title: Superheroes
I really enjoyed this story! Very creative and I loved the way Pam and Jim opened up to each other over time and how Pam was able to feel loved and appriciated.
Date: December 28, 2007 07:58 pm Title: Superheroes
i've been following this for a while and really enjoying it! i'm so glad to see you update it.. really fun story that makes me smile. plus it's well-written!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad to make you smile!!
7 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2007 09:49 am Title: Superheroes
I enjoyed this first chapter, but Pooperman is really kinda gross, though very fitting as Jim is really just a boy at heart. :)
One thing though...in the beginning when he asks Pam to respond appropriately if she accepts his challenge, I was so expecting her to say "Absolutely I do". Any reason you didn't use that?
Great Job, I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Umm, i just didn't remember it? I'm not sure. I'll say I just wanted to be mysterious ;)
10 [Report This]Date: December 01, 2007 10:30 pm Title: Superheroes
AG!!! I'm so happy you're finally posting the rest of the chapters here!!! It's much easier to read on here than ff.net!
*adding to favorites*
Author's Response:
Hmm, why's it easier to read it on here? But sure, I'll try and keep posting the rest of the chapters. They're all written.
*thanking you greatly*
Date: November 19, 2007 11:18 pm Title: Superheroes
Wait.. have I not mentioned how I squeed like a girly-girl at seeing Jim calling Pam Starshine? shame on me.. just, shame. ^_^ LOVE this!
Author's Response: haha! I would say I did it for you, but really, I just love the song!!! Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: November 11, 2007 06:27 pm Title: Superheroes
Haha! love it, please continue SOON
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The next chapter will be up sometime tomorrow!
Date: November 10, 2007 06:44 pm Title: Superheroes
Personally, I thought Pam's was funnier than Jim. Now, if anyone asks me what my superpower would be, I will tell them that not only would I explode at will, I would be in love with myself. And make it rain.
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate your review! The only reason I picked Jim's over Pam's is because when I play with my favorite four year old, I'm Pooperman and those are my powers. Pam's was just made up on the spot. Pooperman is real! Thanks for your review, I think you'd make a great superhero!
Date: November 10, 2007 03:58 pm Title: Superheroes
i loved the first chapter and i can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! more should be up either later tonight or sometime tomorrow! I've written chapter two and am writing three currently! I love writing this story :) Look for it! Thanks again!
Date: November 10, 2007 01:52 pm Title: Superheroes
captivating. gross. more please.
Author's Response: Wow! I've never heard captivating and gross together before! Thanks. The next chapter will be a bit more gross, but after that I'm thinking things will settle down :) Thanks for reading!
Date: November 10, 2007 12:41 pm Title: Superheroes
more !
Author's Response: Writing it now! Will update it soon! Thanks for reading!
Date: November 10, 2007 08:12 am Title: Superheroes
I really like this premise! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll be sure to write and post more soon! Thanks for reading!
Date: November 10, 2007 06:46 am Title: Superheroes
Oh, I really like this premise and can't wait for the more personal questions!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like it!