10 [Report This]Date: November 16, 2006 10:31 pm Title: Her Apartment
::sigh:: after tonight's episode I sooooooo need happy Jam. Thank you!!! It's like therapy!
Author's Response: So thrilled I could be of assitance. Thank you for the review.
10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 01:40 am Title: Her Apartment
Well done. Very wel done. The essence of good writing is sensual detail, and you have a gift for it. Cultivate it. I can see her apartment. You bring dimension and depth to Pam without directly describing her, letting us see her through Jim's eyes directly. And this piece is just long enough. Any longer would have been too much. Lack of self-restraint is a hallmark of bad fanfic--you have avoided this pitfall admirably. I applaud you.
Author's Response: Thank you. Specific reviews are wonderful. I really appreciate the time you took. I'm very glad you enjoyed it. (Every time I post I fear the label "bad fanfic.")
10 [Report This]Date: September 14, 2006 09:00 am Title: Her Apartment
This is poetry - just absolute poetry. Incredible.
Author's Response: Thak you so much. I truly appreciate that.
Date: September 07, 2006 06:38 am Title: Her Apartment
I love the contrast between how she'll feel if she loses them. Excellent!
Author's Response: Thank you. I figure if she ever thought about it like that, she'd feel something similar.
9 [Report This]Date: September 04, 2006 09:39 pm Title: Her Apartment
Wonderful. Drabble away...
Date: September 01, 2006 06:23 am Title: Her Apartment
Continue please! And "he loves that she is his home" sums it all up beautifully.
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate the review.
Date: August 31, 2006 05:44 am Title: Her Apartment
Ah, the potential that is Pam. You capture her, and the way he would see her, beautifully.
Author's Response: Thank you, that means a lot me.
Date: August 30, 2006 07:55 pm Title: Her Apartment
That was such a lovely description of Pam's apartment. So much for Jim to love. :)
Author's Response: Thank you
8 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2006 06:35 pm Title: Her Apartment
This was beautiful. I loved your repeating "He loves" and my favorite was "He loves that she is his home".
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: August 30, 2006 06:11 pm Title: Her Apartment
That's an amazing little snapshot.
Also, I'm jealous and want Pam to help me decorate my place.
Author's Response: Thank you. Pam's apt is an idealized version of my place, you know, without the pile of laundry in the corner, the stacks of dirty dishes in the sink, and the layer of dust and cat air that covers everything. : )