8 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
"It was the only thing that was keeping me going, and yet, it was the very thing that Jim lacked. If he didn’t have a heartbeat, I didn’t want one either."
OK - that truly brought tears to my eyes. Truly. You are doing an awesome job with this incredibly sad story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for pointing out parts that you like. I love when people do that to my work. It truly makes me feel like an author. And plus, it makes me feel really swell!!!
Thanks agian for reading and reviewing!
Date: November 26, 2007 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
So sad. Poor Pam, Addision and Jake. :(
You already know that you are amazing and this makes my heart break whenever I read it sooooo yeah.
Sorry for being "too smart" to read it!! I still loved it :D "Who's Jim again?"
Author's Response: Hehehe. You're too smart....I had one reviewer go "Is Jake and Addison their kids?" so...maybe my way actually worked! Hehehe...anywho, thanks!
Date: November 26, 2007 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
are Addison and Jake their kids? I'm hooked, this is really good. Suspenseful.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! ANother chapter will be posted in a day or two....then you'll find out more....:)