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Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Cake Covered Sleeves.

this was so adorable and i thought it was just going to be over after she said:


“No you know what you are?” she asked, making her way closer to the sink.

“An ass…”

but of course it was not and this is amzing and very like them

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 10:23 am Title: Chapter 4: The Cake Covered Sleeves.

Excellent! Please continue the story!

Reviewer: bee sly Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2007 12:12 am Title: Chapter 4: The Cake Covered Sleeves.

WHAT?!?!?! that was evil!!! you can't stop there!! I demand(in my best dwight voice) that you get back here this instant!!! ......ok please come back and  write some more!!!

Awesome chapter!

Author's Response: :D why thank you and of course more is to come!!!!!!!!!! xoxo

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08, 2007 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Cake Covered Sleeves.

I've enjoyed this story a lot.  I think it's a very plausible alternate path from Casino night; you have the whole thing laying out very realistically.

Reviewer: dundermifflinthisisdani Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08, 2007 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 4: The Cake Covered Sleeves.

this is PERFECT !
i love it (:

Author's Response: thank you!!!! <3333

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