Date: September 12, 2008 03:39 pm Title: ...fa la la la la...
Noooo, Anne needs to leave!
Date: January 10, 2008 11:33 am Title: ...fa la la la la...
OK, I was just floating along on the happy holiday fluff, and then BAM, now I'm upset along with Larissa and Pam. I love how you make creating this atmosphere seem effortless, and how you've managed to cram in so many characters but have them all real and distinct. Great so far!
Date: January 10, 2008 11:05 am Title: ...fa la la la la...
Gah! Jim and Anne! I did not see that coming.
10 [Report This]Date: December 23, 2007 05:41 pm Title: ...fa la la la la...
Okay, first of all, you've been secretly placing cameras at the last five Christmases I've spent at Mrs. Mose's parent's house, haven't you? Whew! I tell you, you've just got this amazing knack for filling this story with such realistic feeling and sounding moments. It's just beautiful.
And then there's Anne. "Jim & Anne." Yeah, that was deliberate on your part, wasn't it? Even her name sounds like Pam's? (I suppose you could have named Jim's ex Tammy, so you could have had "Jim & Tam," but that's a little easy, yes? :P)
Another great chapter! Oh, and before I forget, I loved Larissa's line about Jim wanting to slay dragons for Pam. SO cute. :)
Author's Response:
Jim and Anne, yeah totally deliberate. I considered Jim and Sam(antha) for a very brief, insane, second...but I went for the more subtle approach ;-) And thank you again, can I just say that I love that you've commented on each chapter?!?! You're fantastic and I love reading your reviews! Thank you thank you thank you!