9 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2008 07:22 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
Sooo freaking adorable. I love all the THs!
"Well. God created the outdoors. Perhaps he'll forgive you." Jim crossed his fingers. "Countin' on it."
This exchange is classic. HA!
Author's Response: hehehe...that seemed to be a crowd pleaser! You never know what people are gonna dig the most! lol. I think my favorite was Stanley talking about giving them the toaster. lol
10 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2008 06:16 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
This. Is. Awesome. haha, seriously, this was so funny! "I'm sorry Jim, please be my fiancée again...." ..."I'll think about it..." Your characterization was perfect!
Author's Response: aw, you rock! Nothing more fun than Jim and Pam banter!
8 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2008 05:55 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
Very funny talking heads... you captured Jim and Pam's banter really well. Great story.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Date: January 13, 2008 05:54 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
Aww hilarious and sweet! Loved all the office members reacting and the Jam talking heads....I want more, but I know that it is unreasonable to ask considering this was a great stand alone piece
Great work as always
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed the talking heads...Jim and Pam are so much fun to write together in that conference room!
9 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2008 05:40 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
Excellent. Perfectly in character, great dialogue, funny as hell. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much!!!
10 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2008 05:24 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
Oops!
Forgot to submit a rating :(
Author's Response: no problemo!
Date: January 13, 2008 05:23 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
[kevin]Niiiice![kevin]
That was extremely well-written! Such a good story line, very funny. You get the characters so well!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! Such a nice thing to say!
10 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2008 04:52 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
I... have... no words.
*blink*
BAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!
This was the funniest thing I've read all day long! Sheer brilliance here, between Kelly's tour-de-force of, um, Kellyness, to Angela's oh-so judgmental nature, to Pam being Oscar's "fall back school?" Just... wow.
Oh, and "your mom's 12?" Yeah. Good thing I wasn't drinking anything. (Apparently my sense of humor is also twelve...)
Author's Response: THANK YOU that somone else enjoys to use the phrase tour-de-force. lolol. I LOVE saying that....sorry, I digress. Thanks so much for this great feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed everyone's reactions!...don't worry. My sense of humor is CLEARLY 12. Whenever anyone says anything remotely resembling "your mom...." I lose it.
8 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2008 04:47 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
This so sounds like something we'd see on the show - you did a great job with their banter and everyone's voices that I could see it playing out in my head. I loved their teasing and especially loved Jim's "TWSS" after Kelly's comment. It's good to know they're comfortable enough about each other and the past to even joke about Karen being Jim's fallback. Awesome story.
Author's Response: A well placed TWSS from Jim...I like it! I know some people aren't keen on it, but I can completely see him having "picked up" that bit of lingo from Michael as much as he may hate it. lol. Thanks so much for the feedback Kaystar! You're such a loyal reader and responder!
Date: January 13, 2008 04:25 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
After having a really crappy day, this was positively medicinal. Shades of their ecstatic joint Fun Run TH...love how giddy and goofy with love they ar here. Spot-on exchanges with each character, but this response to Angela made me laugh out loud: Jim crossed his fingers. "Countin' on it." Also, I think it's great that you never do reveal how he proposed - love that it's their secret - even from us. This cheered me up more than an entire pint of Ben and Jerry's. Thanks, you!
Author's Response: Awww...ranking higher than B&J? <ahem> Not sure that could possibly be! But I appreciate the compliment! lol. You know, I'm glad you enjoyed the fact that J&P didn't let the cat out of the bag in terms of the proposal and such. As much as my curious heart wants to know every detail of everything, there's something very charming about their need to keep things on the DL. I'm happy I could cheer you up Colette!
Date: January 13, 2008 04:24 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
"It's totally bigger than the one Roy gave you...Even though he probably had a bigger penis."
LOL! If I'd had a drink in my mouth when I read that, my computer screen would be dripping right now. Everyone's reactions were so dead-on, I felt like I was watching an episode. And if this actually happens on the show I will be very very happy. So... great job!
Author's Response: Oh man, you and me both! Thanks for the awesome compliments. Glad I could make you ALMOST spit your drink out. lol. :-) I think i live for that...I know...bad, bad. lol
10 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2008 04:00 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
Soooo cute and adorable and everything great! [/kelly]
Author's Response: that is the awesomest! <kelly> Thanks for the review jillyree!
Date: January 13, 2008 03:51 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
sooo GREAT! you have their voices down pat. the last little scene had me crackin up!
Author's Response: hahaha....the fallback, huh? Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: January 13, 2008 03:47 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
This was so charming, Lovefool! I love Jim and Pam's few-and-far-between shared THs, so this was a real treat. You did a great job with their banter, and the secondary characters were captured beautifully. I hope there's a follow-up to this; like the documentary crew and office folk, I REALLY want to know how he proposed!
Well done! --CH
Author's Response: hahaha...I don't know. We shall see. There's something that I liked about the idea bout Jim and and Pam wanting to keep things private. Although, I'm with you...I WANT TO KNOW these things! lol. We shall see. Thanks so much for the lovely compliments Becky215!
Date: January 13, 2008 03:47 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
Bwah! This was eight kinds of great. The TH's were spot freaking on. And hilarious.
I <3 Jamgagement!Fic so very much.
Author's Response: Aw, this review is GREAT too! Thanks so much!
Date: January 13, 2008 03:45 pm Title: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods
This was such a good story! I LOVED how in-character everyone was, and especially how cute JAM were in their talking heads. Thanks so much!
Author's Response: The JAM talking heads were definitely the most fun to write so I'm SO glad you enjoyed them! Thanks for the feedback!