Date: February 04, 2007 07:54 am Title: Going Home
aww, such a sweet story. i just read the entire series. so sweet even though tons of angst. it did balance out...
Author's Response: Thanks Emily! The thought of a happy ever after for these two just tickles me pink!
10 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2006 01:55 pm Title: Going Home
Better late than never. This was very sad - I felt horrible for Jim when he asked her about whether she was having an affair and she didn't answer, agh. I really enjoyed the first chapter a lot - it was a nice, but sad (!!) opening to the story.
Author's Response: I feel cheap sometimes going with sad Jim - he's such a powerful attention getter - but there's so much to work with there. Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2006 06:09 pm Title: Going Home
Wonderful ending. I'm so glad Pam got her house with the terrace and that they are still so in love with each other that their romantic side is still a high priority, no matter how much it grosses the kids out. Can't wait to read your next story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I give all the romantic credit to Jim! He'd keep it all going!
9 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2006 05:31 pm Title: Going Home
The grossest mommy and daddy ever! lol
Thanks for the fluff to balance out the angst.
Author's Response: You're welcome! It was my pleasure.
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2006 04:07 pm Title: Going Home
Aww yay for happy endings!
Author's Response: After that beginning even I needed a happy ending!
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2006 10:56 am Title: Going Home
What a charming, lovely way to end this - you really handled the dark to light story arc well. Especially liked their amusement at being 'the grossest mommy and daddy.' That's high praise for a long married couple.
Author's Response: Thank you. It was hard for me to conceive of a problem that would drive them to a dark place so I imagined they would have a strong enough relationship to recover eventually. (BTW-as I read your review I suddenly wondered - do kids still even say "gross" anymore?! )
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2006 10:49 am Title: Going Home
A beautiful ending to a beautiful story. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
9 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2006 10:33 am Title: Going Home
Definitely made up for the angst. Great job.
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I'm glad the fluff helped.
10 [Report This]Date: September 11, 2006 10:08 am Title: Going Home
Wonderful ending!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: September 11, 2006 09:29 am Title: Going Home
Thank goodness for fluff. A lovely way to end it.
Author's Response: Good lord- you're always so fast to review! Thanks very much lis ;)