7 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2008 09:52 am Title: The Drive Home
Yes!!! Looking forward to seeing what is next!
10 [Report This]Date: January 27, 2008 05:31 am Title: Simple Truths
Such heartfelt dialog. Just the right combination between silly and sweet.
Date: January 26, 2008 09:24 pm Title: Simple Truths
I think I love Matty. I vote for more Matty! Fantastic story.
Date: January 26, 2008 09:57 am Title: Table Banter
Ah, JAM banter. Nicely done.
Date: January 26, 2008 09:54 am Title: Heavy Silence
You know what I like about this? Pam is all caught up in the whole scene- the place, the memories it doesn't stir up and the ones she is creating...and Jim is just caught up in her, and the visual stimulation from her. It not only seems in-character, it also really parallels my experience with how men and women process things differently. In other words- this feels really realistic.
Date: January 26, 2008 06:21 am Title: Table Banter
Love it : )
10 [Report This]Date: January 25, 2008 08:01 pm Title: Heavy Silence
I have concluded that this fic is like potato chips. Still craving...and I need more, like now. Please?
Date: January 25, 2008 05:24 pm Title: Heavy Silence
soooo good...can't wait for more...loved that they were sooo nervous
Date: January 25, 2008 03:27 pm Title: Heavy Silence
Wow, that description of Jim checking her out was great. I love his interest in even her toes, it really shows exactly how much he loves her. I bet he never looked at Karen's, lol.
Date: January 25, 2008 06:31 am Title: Hand-Written Promises
Of course Jim remembers. It's Pam, after all. Very sweet.
Date: January 25, 2008 06:28 am Title: Driving In the Car
This is perfect. Seriously perfect. The tone of the conversation, the way they can't quite find the balance between serious and playful, the difficulty in saying the right thing- it's exactly them. Wonderful.
Date: January 25, 2008 05:06 am Title: Hand-Written Promises
This story is just so wonderful! I really look forward to each update. Love the guarantee and how he waves away the valet so he can help her out of the car. Sigh.
Date: January 24, 2008 08:10 pm Title: Hand-Written Promises
Love it!!
Date: January 24, 2008 08:02 pm Title: Hand-Written Promises
That's so sweet of Jim to remember something like that. Love this story, keep the chapters coming. =)
Date: January 24, 2008 08:01 pm Title: Driving In the Car
RSN, very cute. Awww Jim's speech about the tie. *sigh*
Date: January 24, 2008 02:38 pm Title: Driving In the Car
great job...it is nice to see all points of view...i feel though that jim might not have let karen down that quickly...i mean yes he didn't love her, but i think he liked her and respected her!! just my opinion...can't wait for more
Author's Response: I wondered about it in the show. I read somewhere (probably here) that it's a 3 hour drive from Scranton to N.Y. With the interviews in the morning, the drama with Jan, the break-up, ad the drive-back, I figured he'd have to dump her fast to make it back during the workday.
Date: January 24, 2008 02:35 pm Title: Driving In the Car
Oh, I like this chapter the best so far!
Date: January 24, 2008 12:44 pm Title: She Fills His Vision
Loved that the focus was on him being lost in her, but it seems odd that he didn't mention to her how nice she looked.
Author's Response: It's coming up;-)
Date: January 24, 2008 11:53 am Title: Driving In the Car
I just love this story. I really do. You mention so many perfect little details that I can't recall reading before (TP by his ear, rating a tie, etc.). Simply put, this makes me happy.
Date: January 24, 2008 10:13 am Title: Pam Gets Ready
Oh, i love that Pam is so nervous about what to wear. If she's anything like me, her bed currently has every article of clothing she owns draped across it. You capture that nervous excitement beautifully.
Date: January 24, 2008 09:55 am Title: The Break-Up
Oooh, that was cold! I always figured Karen refused to leave with Jim, not that he just went off without her. Still, I like that you have him being so straightforward and honest.
Author's Response: I kept thinking about how he broke up with Katie during the Booze Cruise. He'd apparently been dating her a long time and he just up and dropped her. He didn't love Karen or date her longer than he had Katie, so I figured it might be his style - like a band-aid, harsh and quick.
Date: January 24, 2008 05:46 am Title: She Fills His Vision
I love this chapter. Simply perfect. Jim shook himself mentally. “All set?” I really like that image.
Date: January 24, 2008 05:36 am Title: She Fills His Vision
Keep it coming!! It's great!!!
Date: January 23, 2008 09:53 pm Title: She Fills His Vision
Aww, they're so sweet. I love how nervous they are.
10 [Report This]Date: January 23, 2008 09:34 pm Title: She Fills His Vision
I'm loving this story! You're doing so well capturing the characters. I loved the "let's do this Beesly." It's such a Jim thing to say! Can't wait for the date!