1 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2020 09:46 am Title: Court
This. Chapter. Is. PERFECT. PERFECT!!
1 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2020 02:09 am Title: Court
This. Chapter. Is. PERFECT. PERFECT!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 18, 2008 10:48 pm Title: Court
Okay you do write the best talking heads!
Author's Response: Thanks, although I guess they are written heads in the story. Yes I know, that's bad enough to be a Michael Scott joke.
Date: March 07, 2008 06:56 am Title: Court
Michael and jury duty? Simultaneously terrifying and comedy gold. Nicely done!
Author's Response:
I know, what a scary thought. Of course we'll probably see it on the show at some point due to Carell's real life experience and they'll think of great stuff I couldn't have. But it was fun to play with the idea.
Date: March 05, 2008 06:40 pm Title: Court
I think this is my favorite chapter -- you write awesome talking heads! It's tough to get a character down in just a few lines. (I think Greg Daniels will owe you some cash when he steals these ideas for the show).
Author's Response:
Thanks. Interestingly (if you're me and find anything I do interesting) this started out as a little exchange between Pam and Michael but then grew and changed. I almost didn't include Kelly and Kevin's, they were last minute ideas. But it was nice to try and get all of them in so I gave it a shot.
As I said in another response to someone else, I was attempting to use a wide variety of approaches in these stories, in order to get better over time, with any luck. So I was pleased with this one since it ended up very different in format.
By the way, I'm still waiting for your next story. :)
8 [Report This]Date: March 05, 2008 08:21 am Title: Court
Swedge, you are so very clever : )
Author's Response:
Thanks. And I really appreciate your reviews even if I'm sometimes negligent in responding.
It would be great if you posted on the MTT forums now and then.
Date: March 05, 2008 05:38 am Title: Court
"It's all about who you know..." Poor Andy, always trying to get into the exclusive clubs. ;)
I'd try to choose a favorite, but I'd have to list half of them, so I won't. You've done a good job showing everyone's little quirks and personalities in these short sentences, like Angela's understated "and vote to convict." I'd way rather have Michael Scott judge me than Angela. She's... severe. ;)
I like how the chapters are so different from each other.
Author's Response: Poor Andy, indeed. He is probably on waiting lists for everything in life.