Date: October 20, 2008 01:55 pm Title: Chapter Three
Just letting you know, I think this is super interesting and I'm going to get through all of the chapters tonight probably, but right now I have to go watch Halloween, because this chapter really made me want to. Plus, Halloween is pretty soon, so...tis the season. That's not right, is it?
Date: August 24, 2008 02:43 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I found this story a few days ago and really liked it. (I was going to review but my internet ended up being the stupid wireless card that it was and losing internet for a few hours, so I ended up forgetting.) I saw you had a new chapter up and can I just say it is by far the best yet-- with Jim opening up to Jon, I was drawn in so quickly. Great chapter, can't wait for #8!
Date: August 24, 2008 01:51 pm Title: Chapter Seven
This is a great story! I love some of the badass lines between Jim and Jon. I also love how you get a glimpse of the development of Jon & Lorraine's relationship through the phone calls.
I've gotta run and do something now but I'll go back later and write some reviews for previous chapters.
Date: July 01, 2008 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Three
I just discovered this fic and I'm so glad I did! I have to work early in the morning, but I'm going to read the rest as soon as I can, because I love that you're digging into Jim's head and the dialog between him and Jon is perfect. Great job!
Date: March 13, 2008 05:56 pm Title: Chapter Three
Binx, I have developed quite an appreciation for this story. It's so dialog-heavy, but so entertaining. It never feels bogged down (I hope that makes sense). You have really captured a great brotherly relationship. They obviously care for each other, but the teasing is such fun. Great job.
Date: March 13, 2008 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Three
LOVE IT!! I've never understood the Jon phenomenon, I mean seriously...who started it?? It almost irks me to the point that I want to name his brother something else, but I never do because like you said, he's totally become a real character here. I also love that you made him silly and a little gross, like brothers should be. Sometimes in stories Jon gets entirely too sage-like...Jim had to have had some ridiculous siblings to turn out the way he did.
I really love this and I can't wait to see what he has to say about the things coming up :)