Date: September 25, 2008 04:44 pm Title: and never stops at all
So a tiny part of me felt sorry for Karen, but I'm over it lmao.
Date: September 22, 2008 12:00 pm Title: and never stops at all
I love the rest of the office's perspective on Karen and Jim's fight. Kevin and Oscar rule, they really do. Great job!
8 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2008 02:47 pm Title: and never stops at all
I feel terrible for Karen, and at the same time, the "sorry if it made you feel weird" comment makes me want to hit her. I feel so conflicted! (That's a good thing, I swear!)
I loved this! You have Pam written so well and believable. I also love the idea that they spent the whole weekend together (minus 47 minutes). Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! More to come...
10 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2008 01:27 pm Title: and never stops at all
Well, I am SO glad to see chapter 4 is posted and the TOC does not say "Complete!" Another fine chapter.
Author's Response: This chapter was probably not my best effort, but thanks for sticking with me and keeping my confidence up :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2008 10:52 am Title: and never stops at all
*NanReg does a happy little jig despite the fact that she's at work* Callisto, you may have struggled but it comes off as effortless. Really. You did such a great job at capturing the passion of the weekend, the insecurities of the new lovers, the nervousness--all of that and more. Karen's conversation with Pam was a unique spin that I don't think I've read before. It was so believable. I could actually feel compassion toward Karen in this sticky situation without hating Jim or Pam. Yet another fine chapter in a fantastic story. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Nan! I did struggle really hard with this one. Believability is key I think to any good story, so I'm glad it came off as realistic. I'm looking forward to writing the next Jim-POV chapter. Glady you're still coming along with me :)