10 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2008 08:08 am Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
Man, everything about this was perfect. So otally visual, so romantic, so... perfect. It wasn't how he planning on proposing, but man, I would love that scenario!
Date: May 03, 2008 11:04 pm Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
BEAUTIFUL. I can definitely see the kind of day that they had, and the last few weeks leading up to this kind of proposal. Just a life line in the dark - let's do this thing. I love it!
7 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2008 06:33 am Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
yes i am surprised by something fluffy - but it's terribly adorable and lovely. and the mood set in "did i stutter" is transposed exactly into this fic.
Date: May 02, 2008 08:53 pm Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
Love it!
P.S. You should do another chapter in which they move to Arizona. I'm kinda partial to it, seeing as how I live there. :)
8 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2008 07:35 pm Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
Aaah! I love it! This was some of the best fluffiness I've ever read! Haha, really great story, although I would love it if it was a little longer (twss), for extra room for fluff. :D
Date: May 02, 2008 05:13 pm Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
This is completely wonderful. It's peaceful in it's simplicity and I love how when he asks her she doesn't have to say yes, he just knows what her answer is.
Date: May 02, 2008 02:29 pm Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
I needed that!
Date: May 02, 2008 01:16 pm Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
Yeah, I can imagine that Jim has his proposal all planned out, and then in the heat of a moment (like he did in Casino Night), he throws those plans under the bus and just asks her. Well don, as always. Your work is always a joy.
10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2008 12:17 pm Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
I love all your stories; this is no exception! I like the spontaneity of this...and the fact that it's not even a question when it comes out. Beautiful images, too...wonderful :)
10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2008 11:32 am Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
Thank you for this! I needed this one! Great job. Beautiful imagery, as always. I love this, especially:
When they get home (he likes that word now, because it isn’t ‘his place’ or ‘her place’, it’s just ‘home’ no matter where they are),
Wonderful!
10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2008 11:27 am Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
swoon.
I'm glad she said yes in this one. ;)
Date: May 02, 2008 11:02 am Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
Yay -- so glad to see you posted this here. The world needs some happy after all the abuse Pam & Jim took last night.
With the 'fake proposals', I think Jim's real proposal will end up being some way he hadn't planned. And I adore that it's not really a question. (No question about it. Jim + Pam = happily ever after. )
Date: May 02, 2008 10:27 am Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
Aww so cute!
10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2008 10:20 am Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
This is so simple and beautiful and sweet. The images are so strong. Wonderful job.
Date: May 02, 2008 09:22 am Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
I was excited to see your name and a new story. As usual, you play out this bit of life with Jim and Pam like a soft sweet melody that makes you feel all romanticee. (sp? whatever)I can see every story detail you give with such clarity.
*sign* Unfold--so very very good.
thank you for a great friday morning!
Date: May 02, 2008 09:08 am Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
Such a great story.
10 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2008 08:21 am Title: if we got it wrong, it's 'cause the days have no numbers
Unfold, without fail, when I see your name attached to a fic, I know it's going to be an amazing read. This is so soft and beautiful, so quiet. It's how I would like to envison them when they're alone. Secure in each other, despite the insecurities of the outside world. This is particularly beautiful: "In the evenings when it’s getting dark and they’re getting tired and it’s nearly silent everywhere, her lips are soft and yielding, her head tilts back under his and she’s open to him in ways he never thought he'd know. His hands move from the porcelain sink to the back of her head and he lets himself get lost." Well done, as always.