9 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2008 05:47 pm Title: The Cold Open
Wow. I really liked the chapters so far, I hop you're still planning on continuing? I can't wait to see how Jim acts around Karen!
Date: July 24, 2008 12:14 pm Title: The Cold Open
Oh my gods. Karen. That is brilliant. Looking forward to this "episode"!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the Karen "twist" as it were. I hope to mine it for funny and uncomfortable situations in the coming acts. Thank you for taking the time to review belsum.
Date: July 24, 2008 10:30 am Title: The Cold Open
Hehehe......great opening. I found myself really wanting that to happen. I think it would be great fun to have Karen shake things up a bit.
Author's Response: I think it would be a lot of fun too. I don't think they'd ever do this on the show, but I think it would be great if they did. That is, as long as they give her a personality this time around. Thanks for taking the time to review Pisa.
Date: July 23, 2008 05:51 am Title: The Cold Open
Yay, more! I love that David honestly appreciates Michael, but also is smart enough to know how to handle him- have a separate conference call AND make sure Jim is on the line. This just feels so much like the actual show. Love it.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words and review nqllisi. I thought it was a fun idea for David to insulate himself and others from Michael as much as possible but yet still treat him like the boss of the branch and professionally.
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2008 05:06 pm Title: The Cold Open
whoa totally didn't expect THAT to happen. can't WAIT to read what happends next!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that I caught you by surprise there BuffyFreak7. I think its a fun twist that could bring about all kinds of fun and uncomfortable situations. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Date: July 22, 2008 02:59 pm Title: The Cold Open
Interesting twist. I'm curious to see where you go with this...
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the twist, and I hope you'll enjoy the payoff for it. I doubt they'd do this on the show, but I don't think it would be a bad idea if they did. Still, thank you for taking the time to review JennInTheCity, I appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2008 02:54 pm Title: The Cold Open
I liked this and I don't usually read script stories, just skip over them. This one intrigued me. I just hope this is not what happens in season 5! Look forward to where this goes.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you decided to give this one a chance Cheeb. I know that a lot of people don't even consider reading script-fic, and I don't really understand that. Thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciate it.