Date: August 05, 2008 10:39 am Title: Act One
Transient Lesbian Con Artist! HA! And then it's all OK because she likes Battlestar. Man alive I love Dwight. That shit is dawesome.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked this belsum. That was actually my favorite line of this act, so I'm glad that you found it funny as well. Thank you for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it!
Date: July 29, 2008 06:32 pm Title: Act One
hahaha so funny ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks BuffyFreak7, I appreciate the review.
Date: July 28, 2008 09:20 am Title: Act One
OK, you've taken the already-cool Holly and made her awesome! Also, "I knew it was going to be Kevin anyway," made me laugh out loud. This is continuing to be so great!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked that line nqllisi. That was one of the last lines I put in on an edit, so I'm glad it worked. I think it kind of puts a period on the end of that scene. Thanks for reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2008 06:56 pm Title: Act One
REALLY enjoyed this act. I especially enjoyed your Holly. Great job.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked Holly NanReg. Since we know so little about her I kind of had to create most of her up. Also because I'm sort of writing these as real episodes it makes sense that early into the season they would spend a little of time with her character to get the viewers to know her a little better. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2008 02:27 pm Title: Act One
Awesome :) Great characterizations all around!
Author's Response: Thank you so much untherapy. I'm glad that you liked the characterizations, I try hard to get those right. It was especially hard with Holly because we know so little about her. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.