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Reviewer: Lindsey Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 29, 2006 01:32 am Title: Chapter 7

Ok, swoon!!! Oh gosh, I loved this so much! I also love that in every single fic I've read, "Jim" is an adjective, lol! Gosh that man is perfect!

Reviewer: Boof Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 7

Wow.  This chapter totally makes up for the previous angst!!  So well written and detailed.  Seriously, guys have a hard enough time living up to the TV-Jim Halpert, now they have to be as good as fanfic Jim! 

Reviewer: Semby Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 7

Aw, this was a lovely story, and very realistic. They're human and imperfect, so it makes sense that they'd screw it up a bit before they got it right. Sweet ending!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 7

I'm sorry to see this over!  Loved the happy ending - so romantic and sweet.  Yea Michael for playing Cupid!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

Great happy ending! I, of course, loved how Dwight accused Jim of being a sexual predator.

Reviewer: Spamster Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 7

I love this story so much.. and I have a lust for forearms too.  *blushes* 

Anyway... great story.  I love it.

Reviewer: McGigi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 09:43 am Title: Chapter 7

SO good! I find this a very plausible scenario- your characters are so dead-on (I especially like your Roy), including Michael as Cupid.
Fine Work!

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 07:50 am Title: Chapter 7

So sweet!  I love that ending!

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 06:52 am Title: Chapter 7

Yes! I loved that last line. I cannot wait for when Pam finally figures it out on the show, but reading this is good enough for the time being. What a wonderful, perfect story.

And I agree, there are so many parts of John that shouldn't be sexy but definitely are. Damn, those forearms are... yeah.

Loved this.

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 06:48 am Title: Chapter 7

Fantastic ending.  So sweet and hot and just...right.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 06:35 am Title: Chapter 7

Can you make it a happen tonight?  That would be so cool. Great job on this fic also.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 06:03 am Title: Chapter 7

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I feared Pam wouldn't come around but knowing you, I knew she would. We'll see what really happens tonight, eh?

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 28, 2006 05:37 am Title: Chapter 7

Whooooo. Wow. This is so perfect for them it hurts. Right up to the end, Pam jerks him around (although not in a bad way this time!). I love the little glimpse of Michael and Dwight, but this is all about Pam being smart enough, finally, to see that all she has to be is brave enough to reach out to him. Nice.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 6

I sure hope that Pam is at his door ready to apologize! How wsweet of Michael to try to get the two of them together. Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 6

Is it just me who hopes Pam realises what a hypocrite (sp?) she's being? She's the one who kinda got the ball rolling with the whole "Roy kissed me thing"... You'll make her come to reason, right?

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

Gawr, yeah, I was so mad at Pam in this chapter.  YOU slept with Roy, Pam -- what do you expect of him?  Gah.  Sometimes I want to slap her upside the head and tell her to just take him, already.  (But, you know, that's just me, I have no patience.)

I LOVE, love, love the Michael in this.  He was so... Michael.  That was fantastic, the bit about the "new improved Roy," so true.  Michael would totally say something like that.  I can't wait to see who's at the door THIS time....



Author's Response: I know - I don't know why I write such a frustrating Pam, but I always do.  And I'm so glad you liked Michael - I really love it when we see the sweet side of him.  :o)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 11:18 am Title: Chapter 6

Dear lord. Loving this but please hurry up and ease this pain!!!

Author's Response: I promise an end to your pain first thing in the morning! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 09:52 am Title: Chapter 6

Aww, go Michael!  It's so shocking and endearing when he suddenly is a normal human. 

Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really have an affection for Michael....probably more so Steve Carell than Michael, but still.  :o)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 06:12 am Title: Chapter 6

Wow go Michael.  I'm glad he's got it in him, even though we don't see it often.

Author's Response: I know - I wish we saw it more.  Maybe we will this season.....  THanks for the review!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 05:59 am Title: Chapter 6

It just gets better and better!  Great use of Michael!!  Looking forward to more:)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! 

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 05:08 am Title: Chapter 6

You tease. Hee.

Seriously, though, you're hitting all of the emotional notes dead-on. Of course Jim would be unnerved by Michael's revelation, of course Pam would have to 'fess up, of course she'd feel more betrayed than he would - because Pam is used to having all of Jim, and Jim is used to taking what he can get from Pam. Also, YAY for the return of "good" Michael. I love that he lurks inside the buffoon.



Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I always love "good" Michael, too.  Steve Carell just projects such a likeability....  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 04:55 am Title: Chapter 6

Oh, it better be Pam with an apology and not Michael.

Author's Response: Hee hee.  :o) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 5

I can't wait for the next chapter to see not only who is at the door, but to see if they both confess their little interludes with Roy/Rachel.

Author's Response: Yeah - time to come clean.... :o) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 5

Ooh, progress! But they still have so much to deal with that I'm sure there's at least another chapter in there somewhere, right?

Author's Response: Oh yeah - at least one more chapter.  And a happy ending, because I'm such a Jim/Pam whore. :o)

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2006 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 5

Nice, gut-wrenching work, as always.  I really enjoy watching Pam and Jim go through the wringer.  Really, I do! 

I'm totally curious, of course ... who's at the door.  I'm sure you're going to reveal that, won't you?

And of course... when are we gettin' some hot secks?  I am smut-deprived.  As long as it's a little off-canon, why not make it WAAAAY off canon?  Sex, sex, sex -- everybody, sex, sex, sex.... 



Author's Response: Haaahaahahaha!  "Sex!Sex!Sex!"  Hee hee.  Yes, I will definitely reveal who's on the other side of that door.  And as for the sex....hmmmm..... :o)

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