Date: February 19, 2010 11:17 am Title: What Might Have Been
The perspective/time change what flawless, VB!
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2009 05:55 pm Title: What Might Have Been
wow. never mind for the pleading note to continue. i swear this was a 4 chapter story but i guess not! thank god! this was a great chapter - i love jim's analysis. i hope they actually call each other or make some type of contact. i need some of your famously (or at least in my head!) perfect dialogue!
Date: October 16, 2008 11:09 pm Title: What Might Have Been
Yay, I'm glad he sees what she was trying to say. I also like how you show that the separation was really for the best. I wonder how it will work out on the show.
10 [Report This]Date: September 20, 2008 10:59 pm Title: What Might Have Been
"Two years since they’d spoken a word and here Pam was sending him a picture that said she wanted to have his baby. It was kind of creepy if he thought about it. Stalkerish."
LMFAO. Okay, I feel bad for saying this, but that is exactly what I thought when I first read the thing about babies. I was just kind of like "...weird."
Author's Response: No need to feel bad. It was meant to seem a bit over the top.
Date: September 04, 2008 12:20 pm Title: What Might Have Been
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (Yes, I am yelling.)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reminder. As I mentioned in my response to jkfan9989, we're getting our son ready to leave the country. Hope to get going again next week.
Date: September 01, 2008 08:51 am Title: What Might Have Been
Lovely, VB. I can't wait for Chapter 6.
I would say more but I'm in the middle of unpacking and if I stop for too long, I'll never get going again. BAx
Author's Response: Well, I feel flattered that you interrupted your unpacking to read my story! I'm glad you had a good trip...
9 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2008 06:46 pm Title: What Might Have Been
I really love this story and can't wait to learn what happens!
Author's Response: Thanks, Crystalized!
9 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 07:27 am Title: What Might Have Been
Definitely still enjoying, VB, and I didn't find it confusing. Love this line although I'm not quite sure why: Two years since they’d spoken a word and here Pam was sending him a picture that said she wanted to have his baby. Also loved your last paragraph. On a roll I hope?
Author's Response: I'm glad you're still enjoying, NR! Unfortunately, I'm feeling stuck again. Trying to get the train moving out of hte station and get Jim the hell out of his office!
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 07:13 am Title: What Might Have Been
This story is too good for you to not update every day! It's pure evil having to wait for the next chapter! I am still completely in love with this story, as well as your other story Cardiac Arrest. Can't wait for more for either story!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot. I'll try to defeat this writer's block and get something worthwhile posted in the next day or so. Thanks for leaving a review. I was more nervous about this chapter than most. I need to get some momentum going in this story...
Date: August 24, 2008 11:26 pm Title: What Might Have Been
Oh definitely still enjoying! Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: August 24, 2008 09:31 pm Title: What Might Have Been
I am really looking forward to where this goes! Nice work as usual.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: August 24, 2008 06:55 pm Title: What Might Have Been
I really really really really like this story. I always look forward to when any of your stories are updated. My only complaint is that things move really slow. Jim has been sitting at his desk for the past five chapters. It's too cruel.
Author's Response: Moving really slow, like you're getting bored or irritated? I'm glad you say you like the story despite that. Thanks.
8 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2008 04:00 pm Title: What Might Have Been
Hmm..."an invitation to what might be."
Will he RSVP, and if so, how will he do it?? Can't wait for the next update to find out!
Author's Response: In the next chapter we'll see how Jim responds. Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it.
Date: August 24, 2008 02:56 pm Title: What Might Have Been
I was so excited to see another update. I made my family leave the room so I could enjoy it in peace. I am so hoping Jim does something about what might be!!
Author's Response: That is too cute! You made me really smile with that comment about making your family leave the room. Thanks.
Date: August 24, 2008 12:57 pm Title: What Might Have Been
I'm really enjoying this and how this chapter cuts between them. I think your last paragraph was cut off though mid-sentence. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Whoa! That last sentence was cut off. I always paste into the editor and then apply the formatting. I looked it over twice and still missed that. So thanks for letting me know. That last sentence is (previously missing words in bold):
But the moment she decided to write that note and send the picture to him, it became an invitation to what might be.
Thanks for taking the time to review!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2008 12:52 pm Title: What Might Have Been
WOW!!!! talk about suspense, I can not wait to see what Jim finally decides to do. Can't wait for the next chapter! This one was great!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! I have the next chapter kind of laid out in my mind, so I hope it won't be too long till it's written up. I'm glad you're enjoying my little yarn.