Date: October 07, 2006 11:22 am Title: Angela
This is full of great details! Five Schrute girls -yikes! - mixing arts & crafts, Angela and Dwight and a shotgun wedding, green cargo pants! Very much fun. I look forward to them "hugging it out" later!
Author's Response: Thanks! I love fleshing out with details...I have so many more ideas that I'll never be able to fit anywhere!
Yeah, Dwight and Angela 'hugging it out' would be awesome, you know they will!
7 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2006 11:17 am Title: Angela
Loved this chapter. You cracked me up in so many places - mixing arts and crafts, the number of Dwangela kids there are out there, Chriselda's math skills. Hee. Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I just love all these characters so much that it is a pleasure to write!
Date: September 27, 2006 01:06 pm Title: Laura
oh my gosh i love this.
the "check" on the note. ahaha. do you like me? check yes or check no.
i can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: Ah, yes...the note. I totally did this when I was 16, which isn't nearly as cute as when you're 10.
Glad you liked it!
Date: September 27, 2006 04:47 am Title: Laura
HA! I can so see Dwight running in like a loon. LOVE IT.
Author's Response: I love Dwight! I'm excited to write the next chapter in which he goes nutty!
Aw, I'm glad you love it, I'm a huge fan of yours.
7 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 10:58 pm Title: Laura
Love the last line!! It's so very Dwight-esque, lol.
Author's Response: Dwight just walks off the page. He rocks. I love him.
9 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 10:03 pm Title: Laura
Oh, Oh too funny! It's so excellent!
Author's Response: Thanks!! I'm writing the next chapter, stay tuned!
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 09:45 pm Title: Laura
Dwight K. Schrute to brandish a paper in her face and accuse her of aiding a juvenile delinquent who was after his child.
This mental picture? Priceless. And Chriselda? And the four sisters? It's all perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks! Dwight sort of writes himself. I love him!
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 06:49 pm Title: Laura
Hee! This was adorable--love the little details of their family lives that come out and particularly love the last line :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I like coming up with ways to describe their lives without blatantly doing so. I'm loving writing these people!
9 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 06:30 pm Title: Laura
Heee. Wonderful beginning. And "Chriselda"? The perfect name for a Dwangela spawn.
Author's Response: Thanks! Chriselda means 'strong, ready for battle', which seems like a Dwight choice. All the sisters have names that mean something like that, so Dwight can have his own army.
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 04:54 pm Title: Laura
This was so funny! It figures that Dwight would name his daughter Chriselda and that she'd wear a "Soliders for Jesus" camo. shirt! Very well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! I LOVE imagining what Chrissy would be like, as the spawn of Dwangela. She'd rock!
Date: September 26, 2006 04:40 pm Title: Laura
Oooh! Please continue! I have to know what Dwight will do next...
Author's Response:
I'm writing the second chapter right now, with lots of Dwight!
10 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 04:38 pm Title: Laura
Great start! I'm looking forward to more of this!
Author's Response: Thanks! More is coming (TWSS) soon!
9 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 04:30 pm Title: Laura
Excellent! Love that Chrissy has four little sisters to Patrick's one, and the image of Patrick checking the box on the note. And, of course, Dwight ;)
Author's Response: Thanks! I love the thought of Angela having five girls instead of her pair of well behaved boys!
6 [Report This]Date: September 26, 2006 04:28 pm Title: Laura
Very funny. Loved it
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, they're like crack...