Reviews For The Paper Bride
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Reviewer: Muggins Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 10:45 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Except Michael, who yelled, "Inconceptable!"

Dwight looked at him closely. "You keep saying that. I don't think it means... anything."

 Love, love, love!

I'm doling your stories out slowly (one a week, it's torture, but must be done) even though I want to read them all right now!!! Please keep writing stories, please please please!

 



Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Muggins! Glad you're enjoying them. :)

Reviewer: shaebay Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2006 09:04 pm Title: The Awful Contest

I really like it...except the phrase "inconceptable." It was "inconceivable" in the movie:)



Author's Response: That was intentional: another Michael Scott entry into the vernacular, alongside "incalculcable", "nebulose", and "approachabler". Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Verity Kindle Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 05, 2006 07:38 pm Title: The Awful Contest

"Inconceptable!" ROFL I love it!! Rescuing the lady from the paper shredder!!! LOL

Author's Response: Thanks, Verity! Stay tuned... ;)

Reviewer: Shroom Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 05, 2006 04:55 pm Title: The Awful Contest

It is in-con-ceiv-able how awesome this is, Shan!!  Excuse me, inconceptable.  Hee!

DPRoberts?  Awe. Some.

I'm loving this so much, and I can't wait for the next chapter! 



Author's Response: I'm working on it now :)

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 12:29 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Ahhh!  Where to even begin?  "Inconceptable" is just beyond perfect!  I'm really loving this, and I'm totally intrigued!

You're awesome!



Author's Response: Thanks, girl7!  ;)

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 02, 2006 06:19 am Title: The Awful Contest

Seriously, I am just in love with this story already. I rewatched The Princess Bride yesterday for the gajillionth time in honor of it. Jim as a pirate is all kinds of hot. Also kind of curious if you're going to work the R.O.U.S's into it ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! That's great that you rewatched it ;)  I'm still trying to figure out the fire swamp sequence - should have at least some metaphorical ROUSs.

Reviewer: janelle Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 01:25 pm Title: The Awful Contest

this just gets bettter and better... go dprobarts! :)

and the way micheal messes up vizzini's line is hilarous



Author's Response: Thanks, janelle :)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 01:17 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Too, too good.  I really love it.  Get moving on the next chapter!  ;-)


Author's Response: Right away!  Thanks, time4moxie  ;)

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 11:29 am Title: The Awful Contest

Love, love, love it!!!!  So excited and can't wait to read more.



Author's Response: Thanks, bitterpill - more soon ;)

Reviewer: McGigi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 10:34 am Title: The Awful Contest

"Yes. It's long and lightweight and perfectly balanced for my character's build..."
I hope that was a purposeful TWSS moment!
I adored "Inconceptable!" and am looooving the story so far.



Author's Response: Haha!  Nope, that was unintentional. Hee, thanks, McGigi  ;)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 09:17 am Title: The Awful Contest

My local video store doesn't have The Princess Bride. How wrong is that? Anyway, enjoyed the chapter. Now who could DPRoberts be...?

Author's Response: They don't have Princess Bride?!  That is wrong, wrong, wrong.  ;)

Reviewer: Semby Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 09:13 am Title: The Awful Contest

The parallels are definitely becoming clearer! "Inconceptable!" DPRoberts! Hee. It's amazing how well this translates.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm kinda surprised nobody's done this yet to this extent.  Thanks, Semby!  ;)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 09:01 am Title: The Awful Contest

Oh, wow. In honor of your fic, I actually just re-read "The Princess Bride" and this is killing me. You're so fabulous.

Author's Response: Wow, that's awesome, Lis!  You'll probably find this fic follows the movie closer than the book, but they're pretty similar anyway.

Reviewer: rebecca Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 07:24 am Title: The Awful Contest

oh, this is so exciting i can't wait to see what happens next.  i love how you've managed to adapt this to the princess bride story good job!



Author's Response: Thanks, rebecca!  I'll try not to keep you in suspense too much longer ;)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2006 05:29 am Title: The Awful Contest

Shan.  This is beyond brilliant.  I am adoring every morsel of this story. 

I tend to reveiw things as awesome all the time and though I always do mean it - this time I mean it - times 10. 

Truly amazing job.



Author's Response: *yay*  Thanks, Krissy ;) That's just an awesome thing to say!

Reviewer: tonightyourghost Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 11:38 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Hee! This is great. I'm doing the mental comparisons in my mind. I love that Michael keeps saying "inconceptable." What a fun fic! Yeah.... basically awesome. The thought of Jim crossed with the Dread Pirate Roberts did something squiggly to my insides. Only, more fun than that sounds. 

Author's Response: Oh, no, squiggly insides sounds good! Glad you like it, tonightyourghost :)

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 10:52 pm Title: The Awful Contest

"Inconceptable."

Wow. Just...

Genius. You are so effing smart. Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: Whoa, thanks, Shan ;)

Reviewer: DementedRiku Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 10:48 pm Title: The Awful Contest

OMG this is so exciting! lol can't wait for the next chapter!


Author's Response: Good! Thanks, DementedRiku :)

Reviewer: Rose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:51 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Genius.

That's all I have to say.



Author's Response: Wow, thanks, Rose ;)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:22 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Okay, the fact that Michael can't say inconceivable had me giggling for a long, long time.  And Packer as Prince Humperdinck!  Awesome!

Author's Response: That's great - thanks, Gen ;)  And Packer... ew.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:14 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Loved that chapter.  Pam up for bids, wonderful.

Author's Response: Thanks, gotkona :)

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:03 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Inconceptable!

Hahahahaha! Love it. That and the shredding macheels. Love this story. I have such a desire to watch the movie now. 

Can't wait for the virtual sword match. Hee. Fabulous job.



Author's Response:

Thanks, TV_Buffy!  The sword match should be fun ;)

Reviewer: GreenEyes Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 09:01 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Just...ahh. This story is outrageously cute already, and I'm kind of obsessed with it and you. =) I just love the pacing and the tone and the little interjections of grandpa and granddaughter talking...you are a wonderful writer! Keep it coming!



Author's Response: Awesome, thanks, GreenEyes!  :)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30, 2006 08:43 pm Title: The Awful Contest

Inconceptable.

Hee!  And the Shrieking E... er, Shredding Machine!  

Lovin' this! 



Author's Response: Yay! I'm counting on you to get all of the parallels! Thanks, Beth ;)

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