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Reviewer: Muggins Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 05, 2007 10:49 pm Title: The Swordfight

Happy sigh.

 ARM: "Hello."

ARM: "My name is Dwight K. Schrute."

ARM: "You killed my avatar."

ARM: "Prepare to die."

DPR: ...

DPR: Good luck with that.

ARM: Thank you. I sense honor in you. Too bad I have to kill you.

DPR: You seem pretty special yourself. Shall we?

I can only dream of writing like that. Just. so. Dwight. AND Just. so. Jim.



Author's Response: OK, is it bad that I want to go back and read this one myself, after all your quotes?! I guess that's a good thing :)

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 09, 2006 08:03 am Title: The Swordfight

My god, this was awesome.  I should say more, but I have GOT to get to the next chapter - loving this!  Perfect, as usual.

Author's Response: Thanks, girl7 :)

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2006 08:25 pm Title: The Swordfight

How many ways are there to say how much I'm enjoying this?  Except now I'll never look at Mandy Patinkin without thinking about Dwight.  Thanks for that. (I think!)

Author's Response: Hee! Just try not to picture Dwight in those leather pants. Thanks, time4moxie  ;)

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2006 08:07 pm Title: The Swordfight

This is so fantastic so far.  VirtualSwordFight ... Jim calling during the fight ... ahhh, I can't wait to read more!  

Author's Response: Thanks, GreenFish - writing the next chapter now :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2006 01:29 pm Title: The Swordfight

This was perfect. You're hitting all the notes and the details beautifully and making it funny, too.

Author's Response: Thanks, Lis!

Reviewer: TV_Buffy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2006 11:21 am Title: The Swordfight

Again, I say this is perfect, wonderful, awesome, incredible...just wow. Since you mentioned you were writing this story, I wondered how you were going to fit in the various elements. Everything you've done has exceeded my imagination ten-fold. 

I can't single out my favorite parts; they're all my favorite. But, the avatar line was definitely inspired. Pefect parody. Pefect characterization.

Can't wait to read the next chapter. 



Author's Response: Thanks, TV_Buffy! Should have the next one up soon...

Reviewer: Semby Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2006 09:16 am Title: The Swordfight

Hee! What a fun chapter. I love Jim calling Dwight and talking him through it. I also love that it would have been the perfect moment for him to give bad advice, but much like Westley, is too "honorable" to do so :)

Author's Response: But that doesn't mean he didn't take advantage of knowing exactly what Dwight would be doing! Thanks, Semby! ;)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2006 06:55 am Title: The Swordfight

Such a cool, cool chapter. Dwight as ARM? Funny!

Author's Response:

Dwight's all about the title!  Thanks, Luna :)

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 07:37 pm Title: The Swordfight

ARM: We fought to exhaustion.

ARM: We fought until our armor was in shreds.

ARM: We fought as long as the servers would allow.

Heee!!!  And I loved the "irony" of the Grandpa being madly in love with the Grandmother. 



Author's Response: Heh heh! Oh, Grandpa. He's such a softie. Thanks, Beth ;)

Reviewer: Leely Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 07:23 pm Title: The Swordfight

This is hilarious!  I was actually reading bits out loud to my husband (who kind of thinks we're both crazy).

Author's Response: His loss!  Thanks, Leely ;)

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 07:06 pm Title: The Swordfight

Hee, I'm loving this story so far.

Author's Response: Cool, thanks, PuffingNoise!

Reviewer: rebecca Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 06:50 pm Title: The Swordfight

this is so great, i'm literally sitting at my computer laughing out loud.  My sister is giving me funny looks.

Author's Response: Glad you're liking it, rebecca!  Too bad your sister thinks you're crazy :)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 06:24 pm Title: The Swordfight

You know as much as I miss Jim and Pam together I think I equally am sad that Jim and Dwight are also apart. 

You killed my avatar. Prepare to die.

Just flat out - full on - fan-freaking-tastic.



Author's Response: *yay* Thanks, Krissy! ;)

Reviewer: shannanagin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 05:54 pm Title: The Swordfight

"My name is Dwight K. Schrute."

 "You killed my avatar."

Holy frak. This is amazing. There are no words. I will never watch the Princess Bride the same way again.

 "Prepare to die."



Author's Response: Woo-hoo! Thanks, shan! :)

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 05:50 pm Title: The Swordfight

"my name is dwight k. shrute. you killed my avatar. prepare to die."  omfg, that made me laugh so hard. and jim calling dwight during the fight to mess with him was just pure genius! and then when micheal said what i was thinking all along, that the swordfighting wouldn't affect the bidding either way... poor dwight, he's so silly :) thanks for updating this today! virtual swordfighting is 1,000 times hotter than virtual WWII- take that, Karen :9

Author's Response: Hee! Thanks, janelle!  Poor Dwight ;)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 05:47 pm Title: The Swordfight

Brilliant.  That is all.


Author's Response: Awesome, thanks, Gen ;)

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 05:30 pm Title: The Swordfight

Hilarious.  This is so great:)

Author's Response: Thanks, bitterpill  :)

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