1 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2020 04:47 pm Title: Just When You Think You Got A Hold
OK Go videos are amazing. I love the one for “The One Thing”
Date: January 07, 2009 10:32 am Title: Just When You Think You Got A Hold
Mr Comment actually knows about a fic habit? My dog doesn't even know (my teddy bear does, but he's promised not to tell!)
Okay, seriously freaky. Because I had somewhat of the same idea, at least, with them watching that video. The overall idea/point of the story was totally different. But just the fact that you chose the same song/youtube clip as me (or I as you, whatever), just kind of rocks.
Yes I know I'm completely weird.
But I like the idea of Pam in PJ's and old tshirts, but I like the idea more when she's with Jim and maybe its one of Jim's old Tshirts. Ah, total girl crush right there.
Pam you should have forwarded it to him! gdjfhkgdfgdfjgfdkfj
That's me yelling at Pam. I did a lot of that S3.
Author's Response: Oh yeah...Mr. Comment knows all about the writing I do and has read most of it. He's a great source of inspiration and honesty (no disrespect to your teddy), plus we're both huge nerds and support that tendency toward further nerdiness. ;) As for the story, thanks for your review! That's a little nutty that we both had ideas from the same video! :)
Date: January 03, 2009 08:00 pm Title: Just When You Think You Got A Hold
I'm really enjoying these. I've been catching up on this story today and so far I really like it. I especially liked the 2nd "chapter" or vignette or whatever you want to call it. Nice job! :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot - I'm glad you're enjoying it! That second story is really close to my heart, so I'm extra happy you liked it. :)
Date: November 29, 2008 09:44 pm Title: Just When You Think You Got A Hold
I LOVE OK GO eeeek :)awesome as always!
Author's Response: They are pretty darn fantastic. :) Thanks so much!
Date: November 28, 2008 05:58 pm Title: Just When You Think You Got A Hold
Oh wow. The ending had me in knots. But in a good way. You wrote it so perfectly. I loved the progression of this one. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! This was definitely more angsty, but I was trying to shine a light on why Pam would have been scared to just be honest with Jim about her feelings on that fateful night. I appreciate you reading and reviewing! :)
Date: November 21, 2008 07:47 am Title: Just When You Think You Got A Hold
She's done it again! This really turned out well, especially the different similes you used to convey your point. The one about offering to help Roy with his English homework made me cringe (you know, in a really good way). And I especially liked the ending and how everything had come back full circle. Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thanks! You gave the a-ok, so it's all you. :) I'm really happy you think it turned out okay!
Date: November 20, 2008 11:07 am Title: Just When You Think You Got A Hold
Ah, missed opportunities. This is a lovely little moment from their past (and wow, do I relate to Pam's sweatshirt story. It was shoes, for me, but...yeah. Middle school was hard). Someday in the happy present they will see something that reminds them both of the first video and only her of the second one and she'll have a moment of regret that melts in his smile. I just love this- you're making me make up fic to follow-up your fic!
Author's Response: Ha - you're cute! :) Thanks so much...yes, I think we've all been in Pam's shoes in that nasty middle school flashback. Well, except me. I was always cool. *eyes shift quickly* ;)
Date: November 20, 2008 06:37 am Title: Just When You Think You Got A Hold
I love this chap because it's so relatable, LC. Who hasn't felt a little behind the cool curve?
Author's Response: Thanks! To answer your (probably rhetorical) question, everyone. I think that's why Pam always felt close to Jim - because he was a dork, too; totally unlike the cool guy Roy no doubt was in high school. She could be herself. And yet, it almost had to sting more when - even unintentionally - Jim reminded her how not cool she was. /long-winded spiel. ;)