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Reviewer: NobleLandMermaid Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 09, 2017 10:41 am Title: Chapter 1

This is really great, hot but also very much them (always a tricky balance in smut). It's officially accepted to my head canon that they were at least intensely making out before Soy Milk interrupted. (Such a c**k block, that Soy Milk)

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2009 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 1

i'm just commenting again to tell you that i added this to my favorites.

and to get the rating up to more than 4 stars. 'cause seriously? awesome!

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 04, 2009 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

omg. you tease.

in a good way.

Reviewer: Ninjam Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2009 07:59 am Title: Chapter 1

Squeee! I loved this. Emergency girl was annoying, overdramatic and just plain perfect for this fic. Lovely little add-in. Thanks, yanana!

Reviewer: fashion_show_at_lunch Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1

wow.
ya I was definitely curious to see what happened behind that door. For lack of a better word, that was hot. Also you just tied it all in so nicely with the girl on her floor and the beginning. Nice job.

Reviewer: MelBal Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2008 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was good. Ya know, I always felt the show's writers should have thrown us JAMers a bone and had Jim more 'disheveled' when he was sitting in that lobby. For god sakes they still had him wearing his tie! I think this is a bit more realistic!

Reviewer: Sumtastic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2008 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, my gosh, I loved this! Now, I know what happened after the cameras left! lol

Reviewer: Jen188 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2008 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! But you should definelty do another chapter. I felt left hanging a little bit. Post more please! :)

Reviewer: variella Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2008 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's adorable, perfect for that ep. Loved your portrayal of the overreacting interrupting student; I'm sure most of the stuff Pam had to deal with was of that sort. I'm glad Pam answered the door in the fic and the ep; it's her job after all.

Poor Jim, interrupted activities aside it must make you feel about seventeen to get kicked out of your girlfriend's room and sent to the equivalent of the family room, lol :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2008 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really loved it. Great first time smut. I so lol'd at Jim catwalking away lol

Reviewer: Mixedbreedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2008 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

it was goooooooooooood.

so much better than I thought it would be xD

Reviewer: cosbysweater Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2008 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

guh on the story. well done indeed, but also:

"Oh my god," the girl exclaimed suddenly. "I'm missing ten dollars out of my wallet! Do you think she took that, too, Pam? What the hell -- oh wait, here it is, never mind."

I laughed out loud. I totally know that girl.

Reviewer: toyrundry Signed 6 [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2008 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1

i have been waiting to read what happened there
very nice. follow up after she leaves, maybe?

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17, 2008 08:06 am Title: Chapter 1

Nice effort, yanana!  I'm sure it's not easy, but it sure was fun to read ; )

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