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Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: June 22, 2018 09:32 pm Title: author's note

I wish this continued, because it is haunting and fascinating.

Reviewer: JellyBeans Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2010 01:49 pm Title: author's note

Please please update :) I'm loving it so far!

Reviewer: 823freckles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2009 10:47 pm Title: author's note

Sweet home Chicago! I'm glad it's here too. :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2009 01:24 pm Title: author's note

I like this very much. Good start!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: April 30, 2009 07:30 pm Title: Or at least that's when you lose yourself for a minute or two...

I don't know how I missed this second chapter!  So sad and angsty, any chance of a third chapter to wrap things up with a happy ending??

Reviewer: czarag00 Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2009 08:37 am Title: And it starts sometime around midnight

I think this is a very interesting premise and I'd love to see it continued.

Reviewer: Noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2009 11:23 pm Title: Or at least that's when you lose yourself for a minute or two...

Oh you have to finish this! You can't leave it like this! Great so far though :)

Reviewer: jkfan9989 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2009 05:47 pm Title: Or at least that's when you lose yourself for a minute or two...

Argh. That was sad. And I'm such a sap that I want you to write another chapter where she decides to call him or something. I can't help it.

Reviewer: LuxTenebrae Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2009 02:36 pm Title: Or at least that's when you lose yourself for a minute or two...

You're tearing my heart out, here! You MUST write another chapter! Please! I'm begging you!

By the way, I love that Katie offered him to wrap his arm around her to make Pam think they were together. Obviously, it worked! Also, I love the detail at the end that Jim couldn't sleep on her side of the bed still. I would love to see this turn into a WIP, flashbacking to the reason why Pam left him and filling in the blanks.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2009 09:58 pm Title: And it starts sometime around midnight

I forgot to rate this - sorry!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2009 09:57 pm Title: And it starts sometime around midnight

So heartbreakingly sad.  Please update soon

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17, 2009 06:06 pm Title: And it starts sometime around midnight

Aww, I don't like the fact Jim and Pam broke up, but I do like this story - just the quick encounter, and how Pam tries to hide from him, and she recognizes his mannerisms.

Great job, even if its a subject I hate to think about (this better not happen on the show

Reviewer: Noodles Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2009 05:00 pm Title: And it starts sometime around midnight

Omg I love this!!! Please continue! I so want to know what went wrong!

And me being the sap I am, I hope you have them reconcile in the end!

Also I want to congratulate you for posting this, it's not going to be the most popular story exactly, but I'm sure it'll get plenty of followers!

Author's Response: thanks for reading! i don't know how far i plan on taking this but i'm going to do jim's pov of the encounter definitely.

Reviewer: GodInThisChilis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 06, 2009 08:21 am Title: And it starts sometime around midnight

I really liked this look into life after Jim and Pam. I'd actually be interested in seeing you take this further. What happens after this night out at the club?

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