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Reviewer: Par5 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2006 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice! There always seems to be a lot lurking just under the surface of Jan and you've done a good job putting a finger on it.

Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05, 2006 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is a sweet, insightful look into an interesting character.

Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

This was such a good peek into Jan's thoughts and feelings.  When I read about her wanting a man with beautiful eyes who would play basketball with the kids my first thought was - not Jim!!   

Author's Response:

Thanks;) And heh, no, I didn't really mean Jim;) Although, who knows;)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great POV. Thanks for some backstory on Jan!

Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 03:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

I hate that such a seemingly strong, independent woman such as Jan would doubt herself but, hey, she's only human. Thanks for showing this side of her.

Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love Jan so this was an interesting read.  It is an intriguing thought that she shares more with Pam than she probably wishes.

Author's Response: Thanks, I love Jan too:)

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

She has tucked that dream in the back of her mind for now. It's safer that way. She'll hopefully bring it back one day, air it and clean off the dust, but that won't happen until she meets someone who her kids could inherit beautiful eyes from

I loved that part,  And I loved having a little peek into Jan's mind.  I thought this worked wonderfully.  Thanks for posting! 



Author's Response: Thanks:) There's just something about Jan that I find really interesting, so she had the honor of starring in not only my first Office fic, but also my first ever non-shippy fic:)

Reviewer: janelle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 04, 2006 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

awww, jan! how sad... the more i think about it the more i like the idea of her and micheal, he wants to be a dad so badly :(

Author's Response: Thanks:) I'm not sure if Jan could put up with Michael's insanity:) But Toby maybe? I would just like to see her happy:)

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