Date: January 01, 2010 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Pretty cool, I can so see her imagining that. Except I've never gotten that comfortable in a bath. I'm good for like 3 minutes, then I get bored, the water gets cold, and all I can think if "damn, it's going to be a pain to wash my hair."
Author's Response: lol, yeah my Mom falls asleep in the tub all the time, especially when she's stressed or sick...I on the other hand can barely stay in there just like you lol
Date: November 01, 2009 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow! that was great! even though you said in your author's notes that this wasn't as happy a piece as you usually write i thought this actually wasn't too bad. sure, pam almost drowns herself, but she stops herself, and the way she talked about karen at least gave me some hope. oh well, i guess i'm just a little relieved to see that this isn't a sad as your latest story or liv's 'she dreams in color' that i'm in love with.
nice job with the challenge, i'm giving you a purple ribbon for it (my equivalent of a blue, i just like purple better!)
and sorry if this review makes no sense - i'm a little dazed, i just realized i'm completely caught up with all my homework and it just felt weird not to have anything hanging over my head (well there is some stuff i could do... but it's time for sleep :)...) all in all, i really liked this story if you didn't get that earlier in my review!