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Date: June 29, 2024 03:29 am Title: Chapter 1
This style definitely works. I can take a hopeless ending once in a while. Makes it look more real.
Date: January 01, 2010 08:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Pretty cool, I can so see her imagining that. Except I've never gotten that comfortable in a bath. I'm good for like 3 minutes, then I get bored, the water gets cold, and all I can think if "damn, it's going to be a pain to wash my hair."
Author's Response: lol, yeah my Mom falls asleep in the tub all the time, especially when she's stressed or sick...I on the other hand can barely stay in there just like you lol
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Date: November 01, 2009 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow! that was great! even though you said in your author's notes that this wasn't as happy a piece as you usually write i thought this actually wasn't too bad. sure, pam almost drowns herself, but she stops herself, and the way she talked about karen at least gave me some hope. oh well, i guess i'm just a little relieved to see that this isn't a sad as your latest story or liv's 'she dreams in color' that i'm in love with.
nice job with the challenge, i'm giving you a purple ribbon for it (my equivalent of a blue, i just like purple better!)
and sorry if this review makes no sense - i'm a little dazed, i just realized i'm completely caught up with all my homework and it just felt weird not to have anything hanging over my head (well there is some stuff i could do... but it's time for sleep :)...) all in all, i really liked this story if you didn't get that earlier in my review!
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Date: May 24, 2009 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well-done...but you already knew that :)
Author's Response: thanks Sarah :0)
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Date: May 24, 2009 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing, you captured Pam perfectly IMO :)
Author's Response: aww thanks Hannah, glad you're enjoying it :)
Date: May 20, 2009 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Poor Pam, it'll get better darlin'.
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Date: May 20, 2009 01:29 am Title: Chapter 1
You've really captured the longing, nice job.
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Date: May 19, 2009 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is seriously wonderful! Really loved it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it I had fun writing it