10 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2008 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just started reading this because I was filing through the list of ribboned stories, and the only part that struck me was that it hasn't been updated in so long! I don't know if you have plans of continuing this story or not, but it's really amazing and interesting and something different, so I totally think you should. Great job!
Date: July 14, 2007 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
are you going to update this story ever? i love it...keep going. it's amazing.
Date: April 06, 2007 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a really interesting idea- I don't think I've ever read an AU like this. I'm loving the story so far- you have all of the characters voices down perfectly, and the image of Pam crying herself to sleep without actually knowing why is just so spot- on, considering how confused we know she must have been following the broken engagement.
And this exchange is just hilarious:“Are you going to tell how Jan dumped you?” Kelly asked with a stiffened giggle.
“No,” Michael answered slowly. “Because she never did.”
“Yeah, because you never dated,” Stanley mumbled.
“Stanley, I thought you didn't want to take part in our group therapy, so, you know, it's too late to join now.”
Stanley rolled his eyes.
“Sorry, I didn't know the procedures. We didn't have group therapies in the ghetto.”
Date: April 02, 2007 12:37 am Title: Chapter 1
This is great. Such an awesome idea, and really well done.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: April 01, 2007 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just found this story, and I love the plot. I'm very excited to see where you are going with this, and eagerly look forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: March 28, 2007 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is great! Please, please, please don't take as long as the gap between 3 and 4 was. It's a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks:) And... I'll try:)
Date: March 28, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am so happy to see a new chapter for this story! It's such a great idea and I'm loving it! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: March 28, 2007 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oo, oo! Is it a Groundhog's Day thing? Does Pam get a do-over? (I do believe in do-overs, I do believe in do-overs, ...!)
Off I go to the next chapter to see if I'm right...
Author's Response: Not really Groundhog's Day, but hopefully you'll like the idea anyway:)
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love your Stanley and Creed. But I guess they aren't really the point of this fic, so I have to comment on that as well, in which case I'll say quite the novel concept (and terrifying for someone who'd just had to go through what Pam has gone through) and I'm eager to see what you do with this - so I will by clicking the button here...
Date: January 31, 2007 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my, this is awesome beyond words. Although I loved Pam's realizations, the unique Creed interpretation was easily the best. Please update it soon!
Date: October 13, 2006 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such an original concept - and so sad. On the show at least she knows where he is.
Your use of Creed is sheer perfection. God knows where that man has been - or what he's been involved with. LOL!
Author's Response:
I had to be pick someone from the office to be the, uh, supernatural one - and no one seemed a better choice than Creed:D
As for sadness, yeah, I think it has to be sad. It's a very extreme way for Pam to learn what Jim means to her. Thanks for the review:)
8 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, supervixen! I LOVE that it's the first chapter ofa story and not a stand-alone fic. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks:) I don't know how long it's going to be, but yes, it's definitely a multi-chapter story:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Whoa. This is awesome. (And I'm not a fifteen year old boy, I swear; I just sound like one sometimes.) Seriously, though - really, really intriguing. Next chapter?
Author's Response: Thanks:) The next chapter coming soon to the theaters near you:)
6 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 08:56 am Title: Chapter 1
OK, that last line is VERY intriguing.
Author's Response: Thanks:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1
now that was sad. It wasn't a dream from Jim's standpoint that is. Nice job
Author's Response: Thanks;) I'm afraid it might get a bit sadder even;)
8 [Report This]Date: October 09, 2006 03:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Hmm...Intriguing. It will be interesting to see where you go from here. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I think the next chapter may turn out even more intriguing;)
7 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2006 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Really did not expect that! I'm intrigued...
Author's Response: I'm glad you're intrigued:D Thanks:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2006 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really nice and different. I'm anxious to see what happens next. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, kaystar:)
9 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2006 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, interesting. Can't wait to see where you go from here!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2006 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This is such an awesome premise, and I cannot wait to see where you take this.
PS; Creed is a witch (warlock?)!
Author's Response: Thanks and... you'll see:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2006 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
i have this strange feeling creed had something to do with this... i guess i've been reading too much harry potter fanfiction :)
Author's Response: I used to read HP fanfics as well, so who knows:)
10 [Report This]Date: October 08, 2006 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow that was great! Totally wasn't expecting that to be a dream.
Loved this fic!!
Author's Response: Thanks:) The story is done yet - there's more to come!:)
Author's Response: ...is NOT done yet, of course:)