Date: November 01, 2009 01:21 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
Great chapter, I always get excited when I see this updated. I love seeing that Pam is remembering more and the sweet moments with Ellie. Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and also reviewing. I'm glad you are liking this story.
Date: October 31, 2009 09:56 am Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
That was seriously beautiful. I can't wait to read more of this, so get busy young lady :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really aprreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2009 06:10 am Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
Wonderful chapter! Looking forward to more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much =)
Date: October 30, 2009 08:50 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
Scary. I am so sorry your friend had to go through that. I couldn't imagine. I am enjoying this story immensely and can't wait for you to continue.
Author's Response: It was a bit scary, but her daughter is fine now. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2009 06:06 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
wow. that was amazing! you are so good at all the trauma and realistic situations - you always leave me impressed! great chapter and i can't wait for the next half!
my only suggestion, which sadly is a little late since this chapter is already posted would be for jim and pam to be a little more nervous by being at the hospital. well, maybe not nervous but feeling a little reminiscent of the last time they were at hospitals - for the birth of their kids and the accident. i just thought maybe they'd have some bad memories which might trigger some different reactions or mannerisms while in the facility. just my two cents! :)
anyway, this was a great chapter - and hopefully ellie will be better, or at least they'll figure out what happened to her. and of course finish their date. it's so nice to see pam starting to remember certain events - it's a lot of fun to read those moments happening!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I was a bit hesitant to write about it. It was an scary event for my friend as well as for me. I take a lot of Ellie from the her little girl and it became very close to me.
About the hospital scene. I actually had a whole scene about the anxiety they felt about returning to that same place. But it was kind of stealing from what I wanted to get across. There was too much emotions overlaping... so I decided to cut it.
Thank you so much much for your input. It makes me very happy to know that people are paying attention and actually thining about it after they read it. It's all I ask!
Thanks again
Date: October 30, 2009 05:28 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
:) can't WAIT to see the second half, I'm very very excited@!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! =)
Date: October 30, 2009 03:34 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
love it. can't wait for more =]
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: October 30, 2009 03:00 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
Aw this was really sweet... Loved the title of the chapter and how it came out in the story. Nice work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you are liking it!
10 [Report This]Date: October 30, 2009 02:22 pm Title: She was the reason I pushed harder, aimed higher
Another fabulous chapter for me to adore. Thank you! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!