Reviews For "It's Too Soon"
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Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 28, 2009 05:58 pm Title: 4:03 AM

well then. you answered all my questions - thanks! as sad as i am you won't be writing the welcome home party chapter i don't really care - i'm happy to read whatever you'll give us - such a great story. looking forward to more!

Reviewer: variella Signed [Report This]
Date: September 20, 2009 08:41 am Title: 4:03 AM

This story works me up to a point where I WANT A BABY. NOW. Also, the second linked photo looks like it could totally be Jim. Loving this.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2009 11:08 pm Title: 4:03 AM

sounds good to me, it'll be nice to see jim and pam try to get back into a routine, and pam leaving the hospital. what a great story, i love it! can't wait for more, and the epilogue sounds great!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2009 11:06 pm Title: 4:03 AM

wow. that's a lot to happen in one week. very sorry to hear about your sister's brain disorder, that must have been really hard at first, but it's good to hear that you can feel it's a routine thing now. and yay, you're dad doesn't have cancer! that's a lot to deal with, yet you continue to please all of us MTT readers. you're amazing, just deal with it :)

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28, 2009 08:21 pm Title: 4:03 AM

this has nothing to do with the story, but i just read your bio and i laughed for 5 minutes straight!!!! crochet you dumb bastard!!! haha. i needed that for the day i'm having.

Reviewer: iJam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 12, 2009 02:56 am Title: 4:03 AM

I used to be scared of Heffalumps when I was three or four. I was an easily frightened child. Hahah.

Anyway, this is a really cool story! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: bkwrm Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2009 05:00 pm Title: 4:03 AM

This is very interesting, the idea that Pam might have a difficult birth. But I'm glad that you said there's going to be a happy ending. I like knowing what I'm getting into ;o)

Also, I love the fact that Jim's & Pam's kid is a boy. I think this is the first fic I've read where it is so. Looking forward to more

Author's Response: i actually WAS going to make it a girl... but yeah, all the other fics i've read, they've had a girl, so i thought i'd switch it up. that, and i like the idea of a "mini-jim"!

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2009 10:58 pm Title: 4:03 AM

wait, how is this a happy ending. you must not be done yet. please give me another chapter, i'm so worried about this overly realistic (in a good way) pam!

Author's Response: it says in the "story notes" that this is a work-in-progress. yes, there will be more chapters.

Reviewer: JHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2009 06:40 pm Title: 4:03 AM

aww i really liked this :) i thought it was believable, and i can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Liv Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2009 12:22 pm Title: 4:03 AM

I'm excited to see the next update! I'm a pretty weird girl in that *whispers* I kinda like angst. :)

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2009 08:36 am Title: 4:03 AM

Very well written. Your ability to write Jim and Pam honestly - with things that real people would say in the moment - is what kept this from slipping into melodrama. It's such a fine line to walk and you're doing a great job. I can't wait for the rest!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2009 06:42 am Title: 4:03 AM

That was so well written, I can't wait to see where you go with this. I loved little J.D aw - I'm eager to see what happens to Pam and the baby, and how will Jim cope?:(

Update soon!

Reviewer: MilkandSugar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2009 06:07 am Title: 4:03 AM

Should I feel guilty that I really liked this when everyone is so excited about the happiness surrounding baby Halpert? No! It's all good :)
This was really well written and paced and I can't wait to see where you go with it. I just hope it's not toooooo sad/dramatic - there's only so much a girl can take concerning this fictional baby! :D

Author's Response: don't worry... it'll be scary for awhile, but it all ends happily.

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