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Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2011 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 2

Yay, yay, yay! Just how it should ave been. She made the move, and said what needed to be said.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 15, 2006 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

This was such a beautiful reunion. The dialogue was so real and so them.  Totally loved this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much:)  I really appreciate it!!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 14, 2006 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

This was one of the simplest plots I've seen, and yet one of the most effective. No hemming and hawing, just them, saying they're sorry and moving on. Great read.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.  So glad you enjoyed it:)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 07:26 am Title: Chapter 2

Thank you for fixing this fiasco in such a great way!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  It's always fun to shape things differently when you get frustrated:)

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 06:38 am Title: Chapter 2

Ah, very satisfying!

Author's Response: Thanks, shan.  Appreciate it!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 06:19 am Title: Chapter 2

Wonderful

Author's Response: You are sweet.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Colette Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 05:12 am Title: Chapter 2

This definitely left me satisfied and smiling. The dialogue carried the moment perfectly. The only thing I don't like about it is that it's over...part 3 perhaps?

Author's Response:

Well, I'm so glad you liked it!  I'll see what I can do:)

Reviewer: girl7 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 04:56 am Title: Chapter 2

Sigh.  Just beautiful (I have the chills to prove it) and so realistic.  You've got their voices down - and the poignancy of what this meeting would be like (feeling awkward for a second - handshake or hug?).  Wow. I'm really sorry this is over. 

Perhaps you could continue it....write another.....?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I really appreciate it:)  This was the most dialogue I've done and I was really nervous about it.  I'll definitely see what tonight's episode brings for inspiration:)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 04:14 am Title: Chapter 2

Very, very nice.

Author's Response: Thank you!  I appreciate it:)

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 02:40 am Title: Chapter 2

So sweet!  I loved Jim rubbing her (empty!) ring finger.

Author's Response: Thank you!  I did, too.  I thought it was something he would be fascinated with after all those years.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: October 12, 2006 12:10 am Title: Chapter 2

Yay - nice and sweet and *sigh* Jam!!


Author's Response:

Sigh, indeed.  I need more *sigh* moments onscreen!  Thanks for your review:)

Reviewer: tabitha Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 11, 2006 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 2

Eeeekkk I NEED this to happen. This was perfect. I have "Goodbye My Lover" playing and the combination is making me cry like a little girl. Amazing job, bitterpill. Just...perfect.

Author's Response:

I need this, too.  I miss my Jam moments!  And I love that song...it's so sad.  Thanks for the review:)

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