Date: September 19, 2009 04:06 pm Title: September 2nd, 1980 and January 18th, 1981
OMG "He got very quiet, and then told me that he would never, ever become a hunter because a hunter could shoot a deer that was someone's mom and not even know it."
That was so cute. Cute little Jimmy :(
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I really appreciate the review.
Date: September 16, 2009 09:20 pm Title: September 2nd, 1980 and January 18th, 1981
My eyes started to tear up as I read about Jim being sad over the man shooting Bambi's Mom. Poor Jim. Poor Bambi's Mom. I'm glad he watched Jungle Book next and not Old Yeller.
Author's Response: Oh man, I don't think I know anyone who doesn't turn into a wreck over Old Yeller. He definitely needed a happy movie. Thanks for the feedback!
Date: September 16, 2009 04:32 pm Title: September 2nd, 1980 and January 18th, 1981
haha. love that last visual image of jim singing bare necessities...even if he is supposed to be younger. haha
Author's Response: Haha, me too. Bare Necessities is such a happy song for someone too sing. Thanks for the review!
Date: September 16, 2009 09:09 am Title: September 2nd, 1980 and January 18th, 1981
I really like the concept of this. I think it would be beneficial to think about trying to putmore "you" into the story you just seem kind of disconnected from it. overally I love jimmy and can't wait to hear more!!
Author's Response: That's a really good idea. I'll try to think about that more for the next update. I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the feedback.
Date: September 12, 2009 05:24 pm Title: March 18th, 1978
i love hearing things from different people's perspectives, especailly those rare characters like larissa. can't wait for more =]
Author's Response: There will be more soon, I promise! I'm glad you like it, though, thanks for the feedback.
Date: September 07, 2009 10:11 pm Title: March 18th, 1978
aww, so cute. i think this is the first story i've ever read set from jim's parents pov, i like it. though i must admit i thought it was michael scott being referred to at the beginning! anyway, this is very well written, i can tell that this is an older person, or one from a older time period, great job with that, and i can't wait for more chapters! it would be great if they were a little longer too!
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I realized that I probably should have picked a different name for Jim's father but I was drawing a blank. There will be more chapters soon, and I'll keep in mind what you said about being longer.