Date: March 08, 2019 08:18 am Title: The Taking a Chance Series: Hot Girl
So I was pointed back here (I've read it before) by the MTT Facebook page, and I'm really glad I was. This is just such a delightful in-character mini AU and I love the resolution of it.
My favorite moment is when she notices that "Roy took the truck." She asked him to finish dinner and instead he's outta there, not considering that this could be resolved if he'd just be considerate. Such a good detail, so accurate to them both though.
Date: September 14, 2009 08:28 pm Title: The Taking a Chance Series: Hot Girl
Wow This was really good. As I was reading it I kept glancing at the little bar to the right noticing how it was getting towards the end but they weren't close to being together yet, and then you came through! I understand the point of the Taking a Chance series, but any chance you might continue this? I know i'd love to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments! I will never say never, but for now, the fic's complete. It's really sweet of you to comment, though! I appreciate it.
Date: September 14, 2009 05:31 pm Title: The Taking a Chance Series: Hot Girl
Great job JamJunkie14! I can see how much you've grown as a writer just by helping you out with this piece. There are some very sweet and poignant moments here that really turned out well. Congrats on a job well done and can't wait to see what you come up with next! :)
Author's Response: Couldn't have done it without you!
Date: September 14, 2009 04:17 pm Title: The Taking a Chance Series: Hot Girl
Babes this was FANTASTIC. I seriously love the way you write both Jim and Pam. Ahhhhhh if only this happened.
Author's Response: Thanks for your motivational assistance and support!