Date: October 25, 2009 09:55 pm Title: October 21st
Awww! That last part got me all teary eyed. I was going to comment after Chapter 7 and say that was my favorite chapter of the series, but this one is great. Each time I think "this is the best one." "No, this is." You just keep outdoing yourself! Sad this is finished, but you have something else up your sleeve, yes? I seem to recall something about a fic ideas folder... What a smashing concept :)
Date: October 22, 2009 03:55 am Title: October 21st
I can't believe *sob* that this *sob* is over already *sob*...was it *sob* something I said? I can change, I promise!
No seriously, this whole series and this last chapter has been THE cutest and sweetest story...EVER. And that was before reading Pam feel the baby move. I'm writing this before I read it again for the millionth time because this time I really will melt from...just...gah...
*adds to favorites before becoming a big pile of sappy goo*
Date: October 21, 2009 08:21 pm Title: October 20th
Argh, I've been out of town and these are positively delicious to come back to. This did me completely in - I'm a puddle.
"With her sketch book laid out on her lap, she drew the lines of hands she'd drawn probably about 100 times; sometimes just from memory, sometimes like now...by actually seeing them in front of her. Her goal was to do a series of his hands and someday when they were both old and gray she could look at his hands throughout the years."
Date: October 21, 2009 05:19 pm Title: October 21st
that was so beautiful. i don't want to spoil the perfect flutter of feelings going through my head by writing a long review (i'm greedy - i want the happiness to myself!). amazing story - you've done this so well. great idea for writing this as a beginning! can't wait to read the latest work of yours. if you ever need a beta let me know!
Date: October 20, 2009 10:29 pm Title: October 21st
eep i love it! especially the ending... so sweet.
i'm very sad to see this end. i didn't even mind getting woken up at 12:30 AM by my blackberry letting me know that this had been updated. and i have to work at 6 tomorrow. totally worth it.
Date: October 20, 2009 10:29 am Title: October 20th
No, make them be on their honeymoon forever :( You have the power to do this COME ONNNN!!!
Loved this so much, I'm sick and still love the whole banged up Jim thing, mmmm :) and super cute his wedding ring woke him up aw :)
Date: October 20, 2009 03:48 am Title: October 20th
Thanks LF - I was having a bit of a rough day but cheered up instantly just seing you'd updated. :)
ITA with Jim. Team Girl all the way. There were several bits that made me laugh out loud like Jim's suggestion of 'Agent Michael Scarn' and the last line. But my favourite has to be this:
Pam spoke through her teeth. "Get back down there right now!"
Tee hee...I love this pair. :D