Date: October 14, 2009 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was great. nice job with all the other characters (besides jim and pam, i mean) - they were very well done! i love the whole idea of playful banter because that's what so much of their relationship is based off of. nice work!
Date: October 14, 2009 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
As soon as I read that first line I settled in for a funny story,and you did not disappoint! Much as I love sappy Jim and Pam it wouldn't be right for them to have a reception without a lot of weirdness. I liked gettting to see some more of Penny too. She seemed liek a great sister and it's good to know Pam has one relation besides Jim who's slightly normal:)
Date: October 14, 2009 05:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Very sweet and sexy, downtown. Nice interactions between Pam and other characters, Penny in particular.
One teeny, tiny little typo: "leaded" should be "led." I debated pointing it out but thought you would want to know.
Loved how you ended this, too :)