Date: January 12, 2010 10:19 pm Title: bare feet.
This was really sweet. I love your details, I can imagine everything. Very, very cute portrayal of Lucy, too. Your writing is just so fun to read. Great job.
Author's Response: thank you, yanana! I love seeing reviews from you, since I think your babytimes is absolute brilliance! babyfic is the best :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2010 02:30 pm Title: bare feet.
P.S I so missed my shout out in your notes *squees*
I'm SO glad you took my advice (friendly begging more like) and turned this into a series... Lucy is my number one Halpert kid *smooshes her*
Author's Response: :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2010 02:17 pm Title: bare feet.
The first chapter is just to cute, and this second chapter is so true to life. I've seen my cousin deal with a similar situation with her three year old. Hope you've got a few more of these, I like this a lot! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, deedldee! i'm glad you think it's realistic - that's what i'm trying for! i've got some more ideas; the problem is having time to write them!
9 [Report This]Date: January 12, 2010 05:53 am Title: bare feet.
kaat, I'm so glad you expanded on this. Your characterizations are just perfect. The whole story is vivid and real. Such a fun read :)
Author's Response: aww, thanks so much for this sweet review!
10 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2010 08:53 pm Title: bare feet.
Umm. hmm. let's see. GIGANTIC YES for this chapter!
Alright, so that doesn't really mean anything - but really, this was so sweet, realistic sounding (because I'd have no clue what it's like to be a mom. Don't get me started on babysitting little kiddies, though...). Really, this is just lovely. I love reading new chapters, seeing daddy Jim to the rescue. Also, I must add *whispers* I'm getting SOOO sick of all the baby and kid fic stories. Really boring now. But this is the only exception because it's so realistic and sweet and just perfectly done. So congrats, you're the only one I still want to read! lol. Another great chapter.
Author's Response: you are so sweet! :) that is such a great compliment - i will try my best to keep them as un-boring as i can! haha. thanks, pamelamorgan!
10 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2010 08:21 pm Title: bare feet.
Hell yes is what I'm thinking. This is so unbelievable cute!!! I love Lucy, she sounds like such a cheeky little monkey - totally how I see Jim and Pam's kid, you know?
You nailed the characters perfectly, everything IMO was spot on. I cannot wait to read more of their adventures :)
Author's Response: oh, thank you Hannah! And thanks for your suggestion about turning it into a series! i probably wouldn't have otherwise! :)