1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 05:12 am Title: Chapter 2
But she kept her knee pressed to his.
That was something, right?
It's a lot of fun to see a fic in which Pam has to resort to Jim's tactics for feeling close. Nicely done.
Date: June 14, 2010 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
If your life has calmed down any and you have time & energy to write, I'd still like to see what you have in mind for this...
10 [Report This]Date: March 09, 2010 11:14 am Title: Chapter 2
Really good story. Poor Pam, I can see how this would be the biggest nightmare. I have a little suspicion of how this will end and I am really enjoying the trip!
Date: March 05, 2010 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
You have my attention! Please, please update at your earliest possible convenience, as this is the sort of gripping story that will cling to my brain and not let go. :)
Date: March 04, 2010 04:37 am Title: Chapter 2
Arghhh! This is distressing to read, because I feel such incredible pain for Pam! And yet, I love it. Please update soon, I want more :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It is a little awful right now, isn't it? But it'll get happier!
10 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2010 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
I am really loving this. Poor Pam, having Jim for so long and then going back to Roy must be killing her. I am so excied to see what you have planned. Is Jim with Katy? ahhhhhh UPDATE :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It would certainly be killing me if I were her! I'm glad you like it and are excited for what comes next!
Date: March 03, 2010 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
what..thats it..noo noo.i want more!!!
it finish way too soon.
i my god i can even begin to think how she feels, been so near jim and not be able to actually be with him. you really know how to transmit that feeling
yearning for the update
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think I was able to portray it all well. I'll try and update soon!
10 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2010 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
That was great! I think this is really good and I can't wait to see how you continue! Two typos, you spelled apologize halfway through the chapter with an 's' and then when Roy said 'can you at least help me out?' you forgot the t in at. Otherwise, this looks great and I'm looking forwards to more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll fix the typos -- I always manage to have a few! I'm glad you like the story so far.
10 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2010 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Definitely my favorite story at the moment. Please please update as soon as you can, it really is amazing!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! That's high praise. I'll definitely try and update soon :)
Date: March 03, 2010 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
You definitely have my attention! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try and update soon :)
Date: March 03, 2010 08:49 am Title: Chapter 2
Ugh, it's killing me. Can't wait until she's "with" Jim again.
Author's Response: It shouldn't be too much longer ;)
10 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2010 07:28 am Title: Chapter 2
Ahhh yes! I really do love this story so much. Great characterization ("Don't call me Pammy." oh, yes!) and flowing writing. And I'm so glad to see that while it all might have been a dream, Fancy New Beesly was the one that woke up. ;)
I'm just so intrigued by the premise of this. Such a crazy universe! Keep it up and update soon, I'm on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Hopefully the next update will come much sooner than this one did :)