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Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2010 04:39 pm Title: In the Kingdom of Dunder-Mifflin

jajaj what a cute fairytale...i'll tell it to my niece at nightime xd. and add king michael.

Reviewer: bkwrm Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2010 10:02 am Title: In the Kingdom of Dunder-Mifflin

Heee...very funny! But Roy died from a paper cut? Is it laced w/ poison?

Author's Response: nope, just a plain ol' paper cut. poison is not needed in the world of bad fanfic.

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2010 07:43 am Title: In the Kingdom of Dunder-Mifflin

Oh Flonkerton Champ, I like you. Thanks for the belly laugh.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2010 04:58 am Title: In the Kingdom of Dunder-Mifflin

LMAO omg, I'm cracking up. That was BRILLIANT!!! Best bad fic :)

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2010 10:53 pm Title: In the Kingdom of Dunder-Mifflin

Oh my goodness, FlonkertonChamp, that was hilarious! As soon as I realized this was a 'once upon a time story' I began reading aloud in a fake sing-songy and dramatic voice to myself. I got through to the ending (deliriously happy the entire time) and burst out giggling. Do you see what effect this has on me??? SO CUTE! I loved this, and I'm really surprised that people haven't thought up this brilliant idea before. I might have to submit it to the challenges... Pam and Jim in a castle or something like that...

Oh well, this was really fun, albeit short, but definitely sweet. Great job! And really awesome (blossom, extra awesome) idea!

P.S. I absolutely love David Wallace's song with his son and especially the idea that he went from NYC macho business man to ho-hum, 'Maybe I'll go outside today' as he spreads peanut butter and whipped cream on bread. So funny!

Reviewer: yanana Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2010 09:06 pm Title: In the Kingdom of Dunder-Mifflin

Hahaha. "He got a paper cut and died."

Author's Response: hey man, those little bitches hurt!

Reviewer: Dedeen Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2010 07:12 pm Title: In the Kingdom of Dunder-Mifflin

Only you! This and Jim's line, "Infantry" made me laugh tonight!

Author's Response: YES i loved that! i especially loved how he thought that it was so funny.

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