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Reviewer: WishYouWould Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06, 2018 12:50 pm Title: Roy

How sweet is this! (I have a feeling I’m going to be repeating myself a little with these reviews but that’s ok). Closure is the best, and probably the main reason we have fanfic haha. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 04, 2011 08:08 am Title: Roy

Great, not awkward at all, in fact really sweet. Cece hitting Roy's leg with her foot was really cute. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 10, 2010 08:31 pm Title: Roy

i think they should meet up with charles minor... and somehow put him in his place!

Reviewer: flowersformybrain Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2010 08:45 pm Title: Roy

Okay first of all, I love this! Such a great idea, seriously! Everything is so believable and in-character, love love love! The Halperts should definitely run into one or all of the following: Katy, Charles Minor (in an embarrassing-for-him situation) Ben Franklin, Jan, David Wallace, and Alex (Pam's friend from Pratt).

Just suggestions:) Because I love this so much.

Reviewer: kgreene Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2010 02:12 pm Title: Roy

That was another great read! And I am SURE someone already said Katy....

Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2010 09:18 pm Title: Roy

i love tha bath thing..was like a revenge from the basketball ep.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2010 07:51 am Title: Roy

Ahhh loved it. Really cute to see Roy being happy for Pam. Resentful yes, but happy for her nonetheless. That was so cute, and little Cece being "all-done," warms my heart :)

Katy or David Wallace could be cute? I have images of Katy with a couple of kids, totally playing the part "hot mom," lol

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2010 07:40 pm Title: Roy

I very much like your enlightened roy, and the callback to Basketball's "lets get you into a tub" was awesome. Nice job. I'd love to hear about the Halperts from one of their parents. Jim's dad, maybe?

Reviewer: Casinos and Coal Walks Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2010 07:21 pm Title: Roy

Yeah for quick updates that are almsot better then the first chapter! Again, it's nice that you showed that Roy and Pam just didn't make a good couple anymore, but they still had some good memories. It's cool Roy wants a family (such a great way to end a story) Maybe he and Lisa could run into Jim and Pam in another couple of years? I mean they live in the same town and all. For another Loose End chapter, how about Katy? or Mark? He just kind of dropped off the show after season 2. But if Jim had roomed with him for 5-7 years before, they would have to be pretty close friends and he'd have probably heard a lot of Pam drama. Not a romantic loose end, but something I'd enjoy seeing.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2010 05:20 pm Title: Roy

The Halperts should meet the President! Okay, maybe that'd be hard to explain, but I'd read it! Love it, and it turned out wonderfully!

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2010 12:54 pm Title: Roy

Another great chapter, I thought your Roy was very much in character, and I love the bath comment at the end, nice call back :) I liked how you made me feel some sympathy toward Roy, like he's not all that bad. Maybe I've been reading too many fics where he was that bad. But I like how you humanized him a bit more. I hope that made sense. Oh... when I read your any other suggestions, the immediate thought I had was Katy, if you so choose.

Reviewer: floppyhair Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23, 2010 12:04 pm Title: Roy

Wow, Roy was spot on! I loved how it ended happily for him. I'd love to see another....but I can't really think of who else to do!

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