Date: January 04, 2011 08:06 am Title: Katy
I had to re read all of these because I forgot just how awesome this little series was :)
I loved how you had Larissa being the person that Katy first spotted, and how Cece was so happy to see her Dadda... everything was so sweet!
Date: January 04, 2011 07:43 am Title: Roy's Mom
Good idea, Dedeen! We rarely read anything about Roy's mom, so I enjoyed this peek into her relationship with Pam. I like how you portray her. Of course she loves her son, but she loved Pam, too. I'm happy that Jim made an appearance :) Nice job!
Date: January 04, 2011 05:37 am Title: Roy's Mom
I always thought Roy's mom was probably a decent sort of lady - this is very much as I had imagined her. A loose end I'd love to hear from is Rich Sommer's character.
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2011 05:32 am Title: Roy's Mom
Just letting you know I'm really enjoying this premise. It's both sweet and cathartic to get all these previous characters (or at least people that meant a lot to Pam/Jim) to see how settled and happy Jim and Pam are now. I love it!
Although if I was Roy's mom and wondering why Pam left my son, all I'd need is Jim walking into the room for me to go "Ah. That's why." The again, I'm pretty shallow....:D
10 [Report This]Date: January 04, 2011 01:33 am Title: Roy's Mom
Lovely lovely lovely. Having Cece with her when she met Roy's mom was ch a great idea. Listening to Pam's side of things, and how Joanne still felt about her was also really nice to read. I am so in love with everything this story chooses to be :p
Date: January 03, 2011 10:10 pm Title: Karen
What about pervy Ben Franklin?
Date: July 18, 2010 09:28 pm Title: Karen
Hmm, maybe that cartoonist friend of Kelly's from "The Convention". He seemed like kind of an ass...
PS. @floppyhair "but I really can't think of who else to do!" TWSS! :)
Date: July 11, 2010 11:54 pm Title: Katy
Okay - I'm back. I just thought of an idea - what about an old girlfriend of Jim's from college?
9 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2010 11:52 pm Title: Katy
I really loved the awkwardness - but how they all were able to walk away feeling good about themselves - and happy. Very sweet. I did see a couple little typos, if you just quickly look over them you'll find them no problem. But back to more exciting things - who's next? They don't have any more exes... what about someone else's ex? Like bumping into Holly? That could be really fun to read - I'm sure she would love Cece, and then ask about Michael... and that would be pretty interesting... just an idea. Anyways, I hope you'll be able to come up with a new loose end to fix and please keep going, this is a lot of fun!
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2010 09:13 pm Title: Katy
It was then that it dawned on me. Jim liked her—he had liked Pam, but she was with the other guy—Rob, Todd, Troy? Son of a b—
^^LOL! That made me laugh really hard. Loved this piece. Hope you have more people from the past in you to write! :D
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2010 08:10 pm Title: Katy
I liked that. Makes me feel happy for Katy to have that off her mind.
Now... who's end will we tie up next.
10 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2010 08:31 pm Title: Roy
i think they should meet up with charles minor... and somehow put him in his place!
9 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2010 08:45 pm Title: Roy
Okay first of all, I love this! Such a great idea, seriously! Everything is so believable and in-character, love love love! The Halperts should definitely run into one or all of the following: Katy, Charles Minor (in an embarrassing-for-him situation) Ben Franklin, Jan, David Wallace, and Alex (Pam's friend from Pratt).
Just suggestions:) Because I love this so much.
Date: June 06, 2010 04:41 pm Title: Karen
Just caught up with this story and I love it! It's always so great to see Jim and Pam interact with people from their past. I think you've really nailed how Karen and Roy would act in these situations. Like a lot of others, I think it would be great to see a situation with Katy -- and maybe Pam's art school friend, Alex?
10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2010 02:12 pm Title: Roy
That was another great read! And I am SURE someone already said Katy....
10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2010 02:00 pm Title: Karen
Excellent. Loved it!
Date: May 25, 2010 09:18 pm Title: Roy
i love tha bath thing..was like a revenge from the basketball ep.
10 [Report This]Date: May 24, 2010 07:51 am Title: Roy
Ahhh loved it. Really cute to see Roy being happy for Pam. Resentful yes, but happy for her nonetheless. That was so cute, and little Cece being "all-done," warms my heart :)
Katy or David Wallace could be cute? I have images of Katy with a couple of kids, totally playing the part "hot mom," lol
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2010 08:45 pm Title: Karen
Wow! This is really great! Karen's "I slept with your husband" thought gave an air of legitimacy to the chapter. Yes, Pam and Jim have moved on, but Pam will never forget that he was with Karen, no more than he will forget that she was with Roy. And Roy, what a guy. Funny how he heard Jim talk about giving Pam a bath - like Jim heard Roy tell Pam that he was going to get her into a tub in the "Basketball" episode. One thing I love about Jim and Pam now is their love and passion are still present despite their becoming husband and wife. It was never a case of multiple PDAs when they were dating, but their affection was never in doubt. And that has not changed. You have captured their relationship and I hope to see you create more reunions.
Will we be seeing Katy soon?
Date: May 23, 2010 07:40 pm Title: Roy
I very much like your enlightened roy, and the callback to Basketball's "lets get you into a tub" was awesome. Nice job. I'd love to hear about the Halperts from one of their parents. Jim's dad, maybe?
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2010 07:21 pm Title: Roy
Yeah for quick updates that are almsot better then the first chapter! Again, it's nice that you showed that Roy and Pam just didn't make a good couple anymore, but they still had some good memories. It's cool Roy wants a family (such a great way to end a story) Maybe he and Lisa could run into Jim and Pam in another couple of years? I mean they live in the same town and all. For another Loose End chapter, how about Katy? or Mark? He just kind of dropped off the show after season 2. But if Jim had roomed with him for 5-7 years before, they would have to be pretty close friends and he'd have probably heard a lot of Pam drama. Not a romantic loose end, but something I'd enjoy seeing.
10 [Report This]Date: May 23, 2010 05:39 pm Title: Karen
I love this story! Such a great job showing all of the awkwardness between Pam and Roy, but still showing some of the memories they had together. This is such a great idea and I'm really hoping that you'll keep going. How about Katy next? That could be interesting considering she really wanted a great future with Pam... would it be awkward for her to see their baby and would she feel comfortable with Cece??? Just another suggestion!
Date: May 23, 2010 05:20 pm Title: Roy
The Halperts should meet the President! Okay, maybe that'd be hard to explain, but I'd read it! Love it, and it turned out wonderfully!
Date: May 23, 2010 05:15 pm Title: Karen
It is sad how Michael Scott has managed to creative a productive branch.... so clearly, the upside to working for a Michael Scott is keeping your job. The downside is, it's Michael Scott. And unless there's a Jim involved, that's a pretty big downside...
Cecelia in this reminds me a lot of one of my guys. Except, instead of saying Dada, he just breaks down and cries. He's our little Drama king. End of the world having to walk on his own.
Very sweet. Glad one loose end was tied. And now on to the second one.
Date: May 23, 2010 12:54 pm Title: Roy
Another great chapter, I thought your Roy was very much in character, and I love the bath comment at the end, nice call back :) I liked how you made me feel some sympathy toward Roy, like he's not all that bad. Maybe I've been reading too many fics where he was that bad. But I like how you humanized him a bit more. I hope that made sense. Oh... when I read your any other suggestions, the immediate thought I had was Katy, if you so choose.