10 [Report This]Date: February 19, 2011 05:57 pm Title: Chapter 3 It Wouldn't Be Make Believe
That was indeed a cute family story with a lesson, follow your dreams, and later is much better than never. I love it and also they are the forever couple. JAM all day. Great stuff please keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks very much BMOC, for the read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and it makes it ever so much more fun when I get feedback.
8 [Report This]Date: February 14, 2011 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 3 It Wouldn't Be Make Believe
This whole story was really great. It's so enjoyable to read a well written story about the Halperts outside of the confines of Dunder Mifflin/Sabre Scranton.
Author's Response: Thanks very much, jinx, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your comments.
Date: February 14, 2011 11:19 am Title: Chapter 3 It Wouldn't Be Make Believe
And the crowd goes wild! Excellent job, Miss Paula! Your descriptions of the home at night and of Jim's memory of his mother are poetic, this in particular: The moonlight cast strange shadows, making his familiar little world seem foreign and new. For the record, I very much like the ending. Man of steel, indeed ;)
Author's Response: You perv. You just wanna see Jim in spandex. *grin* Thanks a bunch, dearie.
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2011 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 3 It Wouldn't Be Make Believe
Fantastic!!!! Such a great ending to this story. Jim writing a sports blog is great. I never thought he'd give up selling paper to do something this brave, so for him to do it AS WELL AS, that was brilliant.
Sad this is over, but hope to read something new from you soon :)
Author's Response: Yeah, realistically Jim can't quit his job, what with the family, the mortgage, etc.,so I was looking for a way to give him something else to be passionate about and this was my take on it. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing - feedback is so appreciated.
10 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2011 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 3 It Wouldn't Be Make Believe
This is me, giving you a standing ovation. This is beautiful. The way you came full circle, told this story spanning years without me ever noticing, it's just all wonderful. I love that they have 3 kids, I love that they're still bantering years later. I really love how the little blog took off, it's just all so great. I love how Daniel wrote that Jim is his hero. This story felt so real to me, no fluff, but you can still get the essence that they're very much in love with each other and love their family. I can't say enough how much I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and I hope you have many many more on the horizon.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Deedldee. I was trying for something believeable, I'm glad I managed it. Good to see you back in the archives.
Date: February 13, 2011 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 3 It Wouldn't Be Make Believe
LOVED this! But please..PLEASE bring us more.
I love the way you've captured Jim, Pam and their family..so realistic, and I'd hate to see it end!
Author's Response: I'm delighted you found the story realistic - that's what I was aiming for. I don't really have any more chapters planned for this one, but I appreciate the encouragement. Thank you.
9 [Report This]Date: February 13, 2011 11:04 am Title: Chapter 3 It Wouldn't Be Make Believe
Aww, I loved the way you ended this. So cute!
Author's Response: Re the ending - Jim's no fool. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing!
Date: February 13, 2011 10:51 am Title: Chapter 3 It Wouldn't Be Make Believe
You had me at Spandex.
Really, great, great story.
Author's Response: Jim Halpert and spandex is always a win, yes? LOL Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Date: February 13, 2011 10:11 am Title: Chapter 3 It Wouldn't Be Make Believe
Definitely worth the wait -- and a totally reasonable way for Jim to pursue his interests while still keeping some job security. And the 'spandex' is always a win. (That Pam, always so naughty ;o)
Author's Response: Yes, that Pam is a naughty naughty girl. I was tempted to stretch the story with the spandex, but then I thought that people's imaginations were probably better than mine. *grin* Thanks Lisahoo!
Date: February 13, 2011 10:04 am Title: Chapter 3 It Wouldn't Be Make Believe
Love it, love it, LOVE IT!!! But you already knew that. Great characterizations, solid arc to the story, nice control of language ... and so much HEART you've infused into Jim's character.
EXCELLENT STORY, ALL AROUND.
Author's Response: As always, your help was invaluable.
Date: February 13, 2011 09:18 am Title: Chapter 3 It Wouldn't Be Make Believe
So happy to see this. This story just felt so real to me. I loved the angst, without it being any big drama. I thought your ending was perfect. Thanks for such a wonderful story!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks, khand3stooges. I tried to keep it within the realm of things that could actually happen - because we all know that Jim and Pam ARE real people. LOL I appreciate your comments and I'm glad you enjoyed it!