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Reviewer: Andastainonmyshirt Signed [Report This]
Date: May 10, 2011 07:08 am Title: Babysitter - but not for a baby.

Aww, poor Cece! Kids are more in tune with their surroundings than we give them credit for.

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2011 05:38 pm Title: Babysitter - but not for a baby.

P.S. I'm sorry for not mentioning this earlier, but I absolutely LOVE Maddy's name. As I was reading I literally started to squeal because my name is Claire. Ahh, this story is so sweet!

Reviewer: Dedeen Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2011 07:49 am Title: Babysitter - but not for a baby.

This was great and funny and such a distraction from a certain upcoming episode that will remain nameless! You know what? You should do an epilogue... Cece and Maddie should narrate!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2011 05:35 am Title: Babysitter - but not for a baby.

This is so sweet and funny, without being cutesy (a fanfic pet peeve of mine.) I can hear Cece speaking in your dialogue - and even better - she actually sounds like Jim and Pam's daughter. (Just ignore...ha!) Totally fun!


Author's Response: Colette, so nice to hear from you, since I loooove all your sweet stories! Glad it's not too cutesy for you and that she sounds authentic - what a compliment!

Reviewer: TunaEveryNight Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2011 04:40 pm Title: Babysitter - but not for a baby.

I love this story SO much! You have chosen such a cute POV and executed so flawlessly. I love how the story is so cute and funny but there are little hints of confusion and fear in there as well...which is EXACTLY how a four-year-old would feel in this situation. I can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: aww thanks TunaEveryNight! I've always sort of imagined Cece as this precocious little girl who wouldn't be fazed when her parents left but then of course, she's still four. Glad you like it!

Reviewer: khand3stooges Signed [Report This]
Date: April 21, 2011 08:10 am Title: Babysitter - but not for a baby.

This is just the cutest story. I love hearing a story through Cece eyes. Her being with gramma waiting for her sister is perfect. YES for more!!



Author's Response: thank you kh! i'll attempt to keep the cute coming.

Reviewer: Deedldee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2011 07:37 am Title: Babysitter - but not for a baby.

I almost can't take how CUTE this is! The end broke my heart a little, poor Cece crying as she stands in her mommy's shoes! The way you've written this like it's from a four year old's point of view is just the sweetest thing ever. Love it! Hope Pam is okay. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Deedldee - always great to see your name in the reviews. I'll try to project some more cute your way in the next couple of days. :)

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2011 04:25 pm Title: Babysitter - but not for a baby.

That was beyond adorable. I want tosnuggle Cece so much awwww!!!!! Lazybug- so freaking cute!

Author's Response: aww thanks HH! so glad you're liking it so far!

Reviewer: Oldleaf Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2011 01:08 pm Title: Babysitter - but not for a baby.

This is ADORABLE! I love your fics, so I'm excited. :D

Author's Response: thanks Oldleaf - hopefully the next few chapters don't disappoint!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2011 11:24 am Title: Babysitter - but not for a baby.

Very sweet, kaat.  "Lazybug" (and the inventory of what's on the floor) cracked me up.  By all means, continue! 

Author's Response: NanReg, thanks for the go-ahead. I would not think of continuing without your permission! :)

Reviewer: callisto Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 18, 2011 10:38 am Title: Babysitter - but not for a baby.

This is adorable. And I'm not really one who gushes over children. :) The breathless kind of run-on sentences sound just like an excited kid! "Not Safe," I love how that's in caps so you know it's been Really Emphasized by Mommy and Daddy. Let's hope nothing's wrong with Pam-- just going into labor a little early?

Author's Response: callisto! always love to see a review from you. That little kid voice isn't always the easiest to write but I'm so glad you're enjoying!

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