Date: May 10, 2011 07:42 am Title: Lollipop
This is the cutest chapter! So much fun, where I'd be a cranky crab! Tootsie Roll Tulip and Lollipop Daisy are a hoot :)
Date: April 27, 2011 08:18 pm Title: Lollipop
O.K. I don't think I have ever read a story where I had such a stupid grin on my face the whole time. There are lots of great stories here but you nailed Cece like no other. I would love to read more from Cece in the future.
Date: April 27, 2011 11:33 am Title: Lollipop
P.S I'd actually love to see this continued. How Cece copes with not being the center of her parents attention.... but you know, from her POV :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 27, 2011 08:43 am Title: Lollipop
I loved this story and very happy you let us into your four year old mind! Whenever you want to share anything else, yes, please!
10 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2011 05:35 pm Title: Lollipop
Awww. That was the sweetest thing ever. Thanks so much for sharing this story with us, kaat, I've loved every word. This is just too cute. :)
Date: April 26, 2011 12:51 pm Title: Lollipop
This story is beyond precious. Thanks so much for this little slice of sweetness. I really liked the name too (much better than cece...lol), but this made me laugh out loud: "Mommy gives him the look she calls not pleased"
10 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2011 10:54 am Title: Lollipop
I loved this! I'm so sad you're done! How much can I bribe you to continue just a bit, maybe Cece and Maddy hanging out together a few years later? Maybe baby number three could be on the way and Cece tells Maddy all about that? Just a thought. I loved this story so so much, you depicted a four year olds inner thoughts so perfectly. I love how she's excited and nervous and then gets bored, and apologizes that she thinks her sister is boring right now. I love the little nick names, and how she calls toe nails fingertails. My favorite part of this chapter was the image of Cece singing to the baby, that she wants her and her sister to be best friends, and tells her all the games they're going to play. And I love the joyful tears from Pam and the image of Jim sitting on the edge of the bed watching over his family, it's about as perfect as anything I've ever read. Thank you so much for brightening my day with this!
Date: April 26, 2011 10:02 am Title: Lollipop
I'm so sad this is over. I've really enjoyed this little peak in to Cece' world. You've written her so well. This is definitely something I could have continued reading. So, fingers crossed you're back with us soon. I love your style of writing so much.
Date: April 26, 2011 08:10 am Title: Lollipop
“Would I lie about such a great name?”
“Daddy.”
“Cece.”
This exchange totally cracked me up. I love picturing Pam's 'not pleased' face, and envisioning her crying to see her big girl holding and getting to know her little girl, how sweet. Oh, and "Maybe we'll leave Daddy here." lol!
Loved this fic, kaat. Thanks for sharing it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2011 07:13 am Title: Lollipop
First off--MADELINE CLAIRE--I LOVE THAT NAME!!!!! :D :: clears throat, looks around:: Anyway, yeah. I liked this. A lot. Just kidding! I adored it. So perfectly sweet. You covered a whole spectrum of emotions. It really is beautiful. Write some more, ok? Pretty please?
P.S. Tootsie Roll Tulip FTW!