Date: August 18, 2011 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ooooooooooooh, NO. Roy, go awaaaaaay
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2011 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
Things were going so well! Damnit Roy and your timing! I'm so happy that you're continuing this! I love the bantering between them, it sounds so very Jim and Pam like. Now I need to know what Roy could possibly want that he needs to interrupt Pam and Jim right that second. I love the detail you added - that her neighbor that Pam's TV is too loud. I'm really enjoying this! Hope real life calms down for you and you can get back to quick updates! :)
Author's Response: So sorry it took me so long to respond, but thanks for your awesome review!
Date: June 29, 2011 06:56 am Title: Chapter 5
I really enjoyed this chap--great chemistry! No garbage here--a little tension is a good thing :D
Author's Response: Thnak you for your review. Sorry it took me so long to respond!
10 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2011 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
I was really glad to see a new chapter of this story go up. I hope the wait for the next one isn't as long because that was a great chapter with a cliffhanger for an ending. I can't wait to see what happens next with Roy showing up unannounced. I agree that the story is better with it not being to easy for Jim and Pam, but I hope you don't drag out the angst for too long. On second thought, if that means more chapters of your story then bring it on!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! My personal life is calming down, so I'm thinking there won't be a long wait before the next chapter. I hate that I went with the cliffhanger, but it just seemed like the best place to end it. We will get to see what happens with Roy in the next chapter, I promise!