10 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2011 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
You should be proud, that was so freaking good.
Date: July 27, 2011 11:47 am Title: Chapter 8
Ah! Thanks for posting so quick! You rock! I love their honesty here, that they can actually be upfront and say "I want to be with you" is just perfect. I love that even though he was upset about her letting Roy stay, he didn't over-react to the news and held her calmly as she teared. I love the part that he found her loyalty to her family adorable. I'm looking forward to the date, and how the two of them handle Roy as he tries to get his life together. I'll be refreshing the site on my phone this weekend looking for another update! :-)
Author's Response: As always, thank you for your lengthy review, it means a lot! I had toyed with the idea of Jim being really upset about Roy staying there, but it just didn't come out right. I just added chapter 9, make sure you check it out, and chapter 10 (AKA The Date) should be up tonight (Sunday).
10 [Report This]Date: July 26, 2011 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 8
I love it! I like how excited Jim was to go to work and see Pam again, but since he wanted her face to be what greeted him when he got to the office, he used his extra time/ energy to do something nice for her. I think that really shows off the difference between Jim and her former fiancé.
I really found the banter between them to be very fun. I think it really shows how fun and easy their relationship can and hopefully will be.
I am so so so so happy that even with Roy crashing at Pam's house for a couple of weeks, since they both acknowledged that they want to be together, they are moving forward with the new relationship. I'm hoping that since Pam will be busy hanging out with Jim while Roy is living on her sofa, Roy will get the point that she has moved on and he should do so as well.
Really though, I have to wait all the way til the weekend for more?!? Aww man! (I look forward to it!!!)
Author's Response: Thank you as always for your long review. I appreciate every one of them. I'm really glad you're enjoying this story.
Date: July 26, 2011 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
So glad you posted this!
He didn’t want to arrive too early as he liked to get there after Pam. There was something about her being the first one he saw when he walked in that got his day off to the perfect start. Now if that isn't adorable, I don't know what is :)
Looking forward to their date!
Author's Response: I know, isn't Jim adorable? Thanks for your review, as always. I just posted a pre-date chapter last night and the date should be up Sunday night. Enjoy!