1 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2019 02:00 pm Title: Friends, Again
This is such a wonderful depiction of that famous scene. Without being overly wordy you accurately captured how both of them (and Karen) reacted to Pam's moment. Wow. Really well done.
9 [Report This]Date: February 21, 2013 11:42 am Title: Friends, Again
Really well done, Pam Beagsly. Jim may be frustrating to write, but you really captured him here.
Date: October 08, 2011 08:39 pm Title: Friends, Again
Love, love ,love it! Awesome job! True to characters and you really did a great job writing the season 3 angst.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review! It really means a lot that you say that about how I wrote the s3 angst because I just started writing another fic set in that season.
Date: September 22, 2011 06:33 pm Title: Friends, Again
I liked it! I thought you captured this moment for Jim very believably. I like to think he had the courage to tell Pam about the interview and that she didn't just hear about it the next day. I like the way you depict the news throwing Pam a bit off kilter but not leaving her despondent. She's still on the adrenalin high of the coal walk and her confession and is radiant as she talks to Oscar. I like that.
Strong close, too. Pam's smile seeming a "promise and a goodbye" is a lovely image.
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad our interpretations match! :) I was quite determined to make sure Pam remained strong throughout the story. Of course she was emotionally affected when Jim said he was going to interview for corporate (why wouldn't she?), but I think she really had let go of him after the coal walk and was willing to accept whatever decision he made
Thank you for the kind review!
10 [Report This]Date: September 15, 2011 03:21 pm Title: Friends, Again
You didn't overdo it at all. That was wonderfully written. I hope we get to see more moments like these :) Get writing!
Author's Response: Don't worry, I have a long list of moments I plan to write for this story. :) Thank you for the kind review!
Date: September 15, 2011 06:38 am Title: Friends, Again
Not to bleak at all. A perfect insight to more of their conversation and thoughts after Pam's big confession. I am so happy to have this to look forward to.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad my interpretation of what happened after Pam's speech rang true for someone.
Date: September 14, 2011 11:17 pm Title: Friends, Again
You did a wonderful job writing S3 Jim. He was so conflicted -- poor guy -- trying to move on -- trying to make it with Karen -- being around Pam all the time. I think you caught the exact truth of Jim on that night -- how did we live through the angst!! I loved your story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's honestly the best thing I could hear about this chapter because I was really worried that I didn't capture Jim's emotions. He was so reserved during S3 that one can only guess how he felt half the time. And, yeah, the angst then was unbearable, but - thankfully for me - everything in this story from now on is going to be relatively fluffy (with only a dash of angst on the side because I can't help myself).