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Reviewer: Deedldee Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2012 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 14

Omigosh, I loved this chapter so much. Roy's adding such tension that's making my toes bunch. I love them having breakfast together and the ease of how they're getting back to where they should be. But man, Roy is surely getting on my nerves and making me anxious!

Sorry it's been a while since I've been around this archive, it's been a rough month for me but I'm trying to get back on track now. I'm so excited that I get to press that next button, but I'm also sorry that I've been so delayed in staying caught up with this story.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: December 30, 2011 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 14

Of course I'm still here, and I'm delighted to read this holiday present :) I'm so enjoying the growing bond between this little family.

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2011 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 14

Would it be totally wrong and creepy to say I want to come to your house right now and make you write, make you write like the god damn wind? A little? okay, fine, but damn girlie, this is amazing, you always surprise me when I think I know what's going to happen.
Loved Roy and Jim at the end. Hope Jim doesn't get put off by how possessive Roy is (or will be)

Seriously, what are you doing? WRITEEEEE!

Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: December 29, 2011 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 14

Yes, yes, I am still with you! Awesome chapter. I am so afraid you will write Jim and Pam conflict (Jim: You are sleeping with Roy! or Pam: You never really loved me. You only care about Cece.) I'd rather any conflict be about the Andersons with Jim and Pam or Jim and Pam vs the Halperts.

Too bad about the pink sock. I'm think Roy will do whatever he can to keep Pam. I hope to high heavens that Pam aleady clued Jim in about Roy. I think she might have based on Jim's lie ("Thanks for helping me.")

As always, I am looking forward to more chapters. Even if there is Jim and Pam angst...

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