Date: November 17, 2011 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for reminded me of Gabe dressed as Lady Gaga, this will haunt my dreams for a good while.
I hope you're proud of yourself.
(good story though, you write Toby better than anyone else)
Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry I brought up the horrible memory. It was something I couldn't forget.
Date: November 16, 2011 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed this and could envision it all. You're so spot on with their voices, I'm in awe of how you've done it. I feel like Kelly is the hardest to write, but you totally got it right on point. I'm glad Kelly thinks that Gabe is creepy, cause I definitely do too! I laughed at the radon gas and how their deaths could have been preventable. You've got a knack for balancing comedy and Toby's sadness. I hope you write more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing Kelly. And I think Gabe is just super creepy too. I'll try to write some more; my interest in writing for this show is waning. I think part of it is how sick Toby looks.
Date: November 15, 2011 06:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Outstanding, Steph. I know I'm in for a treat when you post a story. You are so good at straddling the line between sincere and ridiculous, and I mean that as a compliment :D Your characterizations are perfect. Bringing radon back (so much more clever than sexy) was a fun call-back. "You know if we all die of radon here at least we won’t be dying alone. I mean we’ll all be here together.”
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And love the sincere and ridiculous line (that could apply to so many Office characters). And yes, poor Toby is obsessed about the radon - it's always fun to bring that back.
Date: November 14, 2011 08:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Gabe's totally on his own though." Bwahahaha!
Ah Steph, so good to see you again. I love your stories so much. As always, the characterization is so perfect it could be a deleted scene. Thanks for posting. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, I guess I've been on Office-fic writing hiatus lately. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: November 14, 2011 04:54 am Title: Chapter 1
"Because I couldn't not write a fic about Kelly and Toby planning matching costumes and a dance"
And I couldn't not read it. I love your Toby stories, Steph, and this one was wonderful. Kelly is hilarious and Toby is spot on, as always. Very sweet and well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.