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Reviewer: JennaBennett Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2019 03:09 am Title: Observe and Report

I can’t stop thinking about this story! I also can’t wait to see Pam’s one-kitchened apartment! I’m desperately hoping that you’ll finish it (& keep the Christmas spirit alive well into the new year).

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2019 01:48 pm Title: Observe and Report

Very cute here. Great way to get Jim and Pam to spend more time together as well. Hopefully cookie baking will open more doors to further conversations. Looking forward to seeing how this one goes.

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2019 01:31 pm Title: A Very Dwight Prologue

Actually that was kind of fun. Dwight letting the air out of the bike tires was a nice touch. While the prank scoreboard is heavily in Jim's favor, Dwight's not off the board at all and it's something like that shows that fact.

The dialogue between Dwight and Angela seems very believable. His frustration at cats seems very appropriate. As does the fact that Angela will respond to kindness. Good chapter, onto the next one.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2019 08:24 am Title: A Very Dwight Prologue

I wanted to add, on this prologue: very good Dwight...especially the bike and the opinion of Pam. Love it.

Reviewer: Comfect Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2019 08:03 am Title: Observe and Report

Oh yes please. I love this. Please please finish it.

You do a lovely job with Dwangela, but especially Jim's worries. I hope we get some Pam POV at some point too...

Reviewer: Kuri333 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2019 06:05 am Title: A Very Dwight Prologue

Spot on. Dwight and Angela very... Dwighty and Angely, I suppose :)

Reviewer: Kuri333 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2019 06:05 am Title: Observe and Report

Lovely! I love it when suddenly Pam gets courage out of who knows where and proposes something like this. Eagerly waiting for chapter 3.

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