Date: May 04, 2020 05:20 am Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
What a chapter.
What.
A.
Chapter.
Honestly, it made me giddy and happy for the whole day. Thank you so much for that :)
Author's Response: AW! I love that you loved it! Thank you!!!
Date: May 03, 2020 08:26 pm Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
Ahhhh! Yay! Go Pam! This was all kinds of adorable! What a build up to get them to this point, but I feel like there’s a lot of great stuff still to come...
Author's Response: So much build up ahah. I'm glad we're getting to the good stuff!
1 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2020 06:27 pm Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
I've finally caught up on this fic and YAY they've kissed, etc.!!!
You've done a great job transitioning high school Pam to college Pam in your writing. She still sounds young, but definitely more mature (and yet, a ways to go!).
And I love 'When Harry Met Sally'!
Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Finally kissed part 2! But way better this time! Thank you for reading and for the awesome feedback on my writing!
Date: May 03, 2020 04:12 pm Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
I have only one critique of this chapter. We seem to go backwards in time. Last chapter it was September and now it's August again. Just something that stuck out.
Other than that, absolutely lovely. Jim bringing a chick flick is a great move by him. Though he could have probably brought any movie and I doubt they would have watched much of it, keyed up as they were. Yeah, just a good fun chapter here. Can't wait to see where they go from here on out.
Author's Response:
Oh shoot thank you for that catch! I fixed the date!
Thanks!
Date: May 03, 2020 03:22 pm Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
(Kevin): Nic~e.
Now lets just hope they can look eachother in the eyes in the light of day.
Glad to see they are progressing, looking forward to the next one.
Date: May 03, 2020 03:07 pm Title: Sunday, September 7, 1997
Yaaaaay!
Ah, this made me so very happy!
I also love brave Pam :)
Great job, as per :)